- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Kael
- Nominated by: QuiGonJinn
(Talk) 17:25, August 22, 2010 (UTC) - Nomination comments:It is sad when you have a hard time finding something for the main quote.
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Xicer9
(Combadge) 23:15, August 29, 2010 (UTC)- Excellent work. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 20:18, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
Chack Jadson (Talk) 21:08, August 31, 2010 (UTC)- Good work.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 16:48, September 10, 2010 (UTC)
- — Fiolli {Alpheridies University ComNet} 03:39, September 11, 2010 (UTC)
- --Eyrezer 05:23, September 14, 2010 (UTC)
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Xd1358
Lacks 1st / 1stm tag- Added.
Could you expand the intro a bit?-- 1358 (Talk) 17:31, August 22, 2010 (UTC)- Expanded. Not much to say about him, though. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 20:13, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
- Expanded. Not much to say about him, though. QuiGonJinn
Returning the favor
As far as I can tell, Comm 4 rerouted the Droid Control signal to the base, not provided power.- I rechecked that level, and it's not stated there that Comm 4 rerouted the signal. All that Kael says is that the base will be disabled if they destroy the satellite. And the briefing screen says, "You must disable the communications network controlling the target base."
- I still don't agree with the sentence. Maybe change power to "controlled" or something similar? Because there is just as little evidence that it powers the base.
- Controlled it is, then. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 18:49, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
- Controlled it is, then. QuiGonJinn
- I still don't agree with the sentence. Maybe change power to "controlled" or something similar? Because there is just as little evidence that it powers the base.
- I rechecked that level, and it's not stated there that Comm 4 rerouted the signal. All that Kael says is that the base will be disabled if they destroy the satellite. And the briefing screen says, "You must disable the communications network controlling the target base."
"set off to escort Borvo's transports to a safe location in N-1 starfighters" I'd suggest moving N-1 to after "set of." It is a bit ambiguous now.- Done.
Link to Search for Captain Kael in body.- Added.
- I think thats it. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 10:38, August 23, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 20:42, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. QuiGonJinn
UD
Is there an article for the Naboo swamps?- Redlinked for now. Will create a stub later.
"He tried not to underestimate the enemy, though." in the P&T, this bit seems to not really fit. Could you try to make it flow a bit better with the surrounding sentences?- Addressed.
The BTS was funny. Oh, and could you try and get a better picture of him?;) Chack Jadson (Talk) 17:32, August 27, 2010 (UTC)- Yeah, I LOLed at it too :) As for the picture, I'm afraid that's really the best one. He is only seen in the first level driving a Flash speeder (which is the current pic), and in the second level driving a Heavy STAP. However, in the second level he is driving like he's batshit crazy, so it's impossible to make a decent screenshot. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 20:42, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
- Yeah, I LOLed at it too :) As for the picture, I'm afraid that's really the best one. He is only seen in the first level driving a Flash speeder (which is the current pic), and in the second level driving a Heavy STAP. However, in the second level he is driving like he's batshit crazy, so it's impossible to make a decent screenshot. QuiGonJinn
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 05:23, September 14, 2010 (UTC)
- Yes, that's the best picture of him. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 17:25, August 22, 2010 (UTC)