Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Jhoram Bey

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Jhoram Bey

(5 Inq/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. As Culator said, these issues utterly failed to suck. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 14:19, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
  2. Goodwood Redstarbird (Alliance Intelligence) 20:14, 27 April 2008 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Graestan(Talk) 23:40, 27 April 2008 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Master Aban Fiolli {Alpheridies University ComNet} 16:02, 5 May 2008 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:13, 7 May 2008 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote -- Darth Culator (Talk) 15:27, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote The 50 FA Club is lonely at the moment. Also, Cade-less Legacy is good. Thefourdotelipsis 11:35, 12 May 2008 (UTC)

Object

  1. "Bey served under Admiral Gar Stazi and his flagship, the Indomitable" He served under the command of a starship? :-) Also, a link to flagship is desired.--Goodwood Redstarbird (Alliance Intelligence) 01:36, 27 April 2008 (UTC)
  2. The outcome of the battle is slightly hazy—I am not sure if you say what the outcome was, specifically, just that the Alliance had only lost some pilots, etc. Could you spell it out a little? Graestan(Talk) 02:41, 27 April 2008 (UTC)
  3. From the Merciless Hammer of Toprawa:
    • For the sake of consistency and not being too confusing, I would say just refer to the planet as Mon Calamari, rather than Dac: "The Alliance fleet gathered near Dac, ready to attack the planet's shipyards"
      • And, that being said, please change all subsequent mentions of "Dac"
        • Done and done.
    • Your links to the Indomitable lead to a disambig page. Please rectify
      • Done.
    • Little context, please: "left Ronto alone against two fighters"
      • Better?
        • Yup.
    • Excellent, Acky. You're refining your work to a point that my objections are almost negligible. Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:37, 6 May 2008 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 18:14, 12 May 2008 (UTC)