Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Jenet/Legends

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Jenet

  • Nominated by: ~SavageBOB sig 06:10, June 19, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: More Galaxy Guide 4 goodness. And who can argue with giant rats in kimono?

(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. I don't want THAT kind of a rodent infestation! Teff 02:00, June 24, 2011 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote --Eyrezer 08:38, July 11, 2011 (UTC)
  3. If Splinter were in the GFFA, he'd be a Jenet. Trak Nar Ramble on 06:42, September 27, 2011 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Is the guy in the infobox auditioning for West Side Story? Menkooroo 13:31, September 28, 2011 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 12:17, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote CC7567 (talk) 02:08, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Jenet? I barely know it
  • An important note: the New Republic becomes the Galactic Alliance in 28 ABY. It's still the New Republic during Ylesia, but the New Republic is history during The Unifying Force, Dark Nest, and Legacy of the Force.
  • The infobox is the only place where "Photographic memory" appears. Should it be "eidetic memory" to match the intro and body?
  • Refs [24] and [41] have the CSWE page numbers but are missing the names of the entries! Menkooroo 07:13, September 27, 2011 (UTC)
    • Thanks for stopping by! I think all should be fixed. The post-Yuuzhan Vong stuff still confuses me, as that was originally what turned me off of Star Wars, so I appreciate the corrective! ~SavageBOB sig 12:42, September 27, 2011 (UTC)
      • No problem. The last sentence of the intro might need a little tweaking yet, as it lists Thorsh and Reeqo Swen as exceptions to the Jenet-not-joining-the-New-Republic thing.
  • I should know better than to ask, but I just want to confirm that the "perhaps" in Society & Culture comes from the source. If not, it might not be the most non-OR word. :P
    • Nothing to see here! Move along.
  • Group deposits of goods known to the Community Heaps fell under the bureaucracy's administration --- should the "known" be there? Doesn't seem like a big pile of garbage has knowledge of anything, but maybe I'm reading it wrong.
    • Whoops; the deposits are the Community Heaps. Fixed.
  • Two consecutive paragraphs beginning with "over time" --- can you change one of them? Menkooroo 04:55, September 28, 2011 (UTC)
    • Over time it was bound to happen. Fixed.
  • Is there an article for the individual CZ droid that Snaggletooth was tracking down, or for the Jenet that told Zorba about Jabba's death? Aaaaand maybe the Lebauer clan?
    • All taken care of (will get to the red link soon) except for the clan. I think it'd be redundant with Invisible Shell, but I could stub something it you think it's distinctive enough.
  • In Behind the Scenes: I can't seem to find feather as a verb meaning "feature" --- is it obscurely correct, or should it simply say "feature?"
  • All from me! Really excellent stuff. I've always liked Thorsh. Menkooroo 07:33, September 28, 2011 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the review! ~SavageBOB sig 12:49, September 28, 2011 (UTC)
Attack of the Clone
  • "He attacked the Jedi Knights Jaina Solo and Lowbacca in a senate bunker during the Second Battle of Ylesia": do you have a source that confirms the "Second Battle of Ylesia" as the battle's official name? Battles should only be referred to as such if an official source clarifies an official name; otherwise, they cannot be mentioned as such. Also, should "Senate" be capitalized here? Please confirm which senate you are referring to.
  • The formatting was a little sporadic—some ref names weren't assigned, and neither were any image sizes. Feel free to change the image sizes I inputted, but whatever the specific size, image sizes should always be assigned. CC7567 (talk) 06:13, October 19, 2011 (UTC)
    • Hey, CC, I appreciate the copy edit and review! Can you clarify what you mean by your first point? Do you mean that senate needs to be capitalized if it's referring to the Galactic Senate? As for the image sizes, I never specify hard-coded sizes since it overrides user preferences. For instance, if a user wishes all images to display at a default of 300 px, and an article has specified 200 px, the user's wishes get ignored, which, to me, is not a good thing. Is there anything official about this? ~SavageBOB sig 13:23, October 19, 2011 (UTC)
      • I wasn't actually aware of that feature in Special:Preferences, so feel free to change them back. :P As for the "senate," yes, it should be capitalized if you're referring to the Galactic Senate, but first it needs to be clarified which senate you're referring to—I wasn't sure if you meant the New Republic Senate or the Ylesian Senate. CC7567 (talk) 04:15, October 22, 2011 (UTC)
        • OK, I went back to just "thumb" on the images. And I actually just removed the word "senate" as perhaps unnecessary. Do you think it's essential context? If so, I'll try to figure out which senate I meant. :) ~SavageBOB sig 14:29, October 22, 2011 (UTC)
          • Hmm. Well, if it's relevant, definitely add it in, but maybe just try and find which senate first and then we can see. CC7567 (talk) 18:17, October 22, 2011 (UTC)
            • OK, it's the Ylesian Senate, and I've added the context. What do you think? ~SavageBOB sig 01:58, October 29, 2011 (UTC)
              • Yeah, it's fine. CC7567 (talk) 02:08, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 02:08, October 29, 2011 (UTC)