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Jad Bean
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:18, 6 October 2024 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: This article has everything, deleted scenes, retcons, a guy named Jad Bean, an inexplicable Death Star escape, an A4 page length monologue about guns, contextless canon images from deleted scenes, adaptations that fully ignore what's visible in the film, an imposter in a similar scene I confused for Bean and wrote two paragraphs about, Video Game Cosmetics, 3 different names all linked by separate products, two products with the exact same name, a surprise career change, April Fools Day, a real human being named Jad Bean, Micro Machines, someone who seemingly gets younger over a period of thirty years and, most importantly, the word Bean appears 70 times.
- Date Archived: 17:07, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- Final word count: 1704 words (181 introduction, 814 body, 709 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 1687 words (175 introduction, 811 body, 701 behind the scenes)
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Support
This article does indeed have it all. Wok142 (talk) 19:55, 16 October 2024 (UTC)
—spookywillowwtalk 18:41, 28 October 2024 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 19:22, 4 November 2024 (UTC)
Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 04:22, 3 December 2024 (UTC)
- Very very well done. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 16:51, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- Booply (talk) 17:06, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
Object
Dani
Given the 20+ish IU years time difference and the more completeness of the portrait, shouldn't the Starfighter missions appaerance be the infobox? NBDani(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 18:15, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
- Since he looks the same age or younger I'd given the larger live-action one preference but I guess technically it is him significantly later in his life. Once we've got galleries guess I can add both. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:29, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
Wok
I think it would be good to mention the Fulminatrix's destruction in the second-to-last sentence of the bio instead of only cluing in the readers to the fact that the bombers managed to destroy it by mentioning the implications of such in the following sentence.Wok142 (talk) 18:33, 15 October 2024 (UTC)- Re-worded, how's it look? Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:45, 16 October 2024 (UTC)
spookly
Do think there's enough individuals that have Bean as part of their name for a disambig to be made (even aside from the types of beans articles).- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:03, 28 October 2024 (UTC)
Spotting a bit of dupe linking in the body/BTS.—spookywillowwtalk 04:01, 28 October 2024 (UTC)- Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:03, 28 October 2024 (UTC)
Fred strikes back
The nickname "Scorch" should be mentioned in the intro and bolded.Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 06:15, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:39, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- I feel like you only need the one intro mention, not both. Personally, I would keep the second mention toward the end of the intro. Master Fredcerique
(talk) (he/him) 22:27, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:55, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- I feel like you only need the one intro mention, not both. Personally, I would keep the second mention toward the end of the intro. Master Fredcerique
- Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:39, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 17:07, 8 December 2024 (UTC)