Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Iskalloni

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Iskalloni

  • Nominated by: QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 18:12, September 16, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Unidentified Wookieepedians. Prepare to read and vote for this article. Your individual user votes will be added to the total vote count and will benefit our species. We are the Iskalloni. You will review this article. Resistance is futile.

(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. I surrender. :P Clone Commander Lee Talk 18:20, September 16, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Xicer9Atgar(Combadge) 15:05, September 18, 2010 (UTC)
  3. And here I was expecting a Hitchiker's Guide reference. NAYAYEN 22:44, September 20, 2010 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 00:42, September 23, 2010 (UTC)
  5. C'mon, these are the guys who made Demagol the bad@$$ that he is!—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 06:40, September 24, 2010 (UTC)
  6. Is this 7 of 9 nominations to come from QuiGonJinn? ~ SavageBob 17:28, September 25, 2010 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote The line must be drawn here! This far, no further! And I will make them pay for what they've done! - Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 10:57, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Assimilate this!
  • Need an article on the mutagen.
    • Created one.
  • B&A: "One unusual ability the species had, which was either a result of their implants or their adaptable physiology, was a resistance to blaster fire." Speculative, unless the source actually says that.
    • Nixed.
  • That's it I think. Nice job. Xicer9Atgar(Combadge) 22:22, September 16, 2010 (UTC)
Attack of the Floyd
  • Intro: "Since their technology produced deadly toxic waste, however, the Iskalloni resorted to slaving raids on other species" Why would this force the Iskalloni to enslave other species? Is it because they had no other way to get rid of it? Clarify.
    • Clarified.
  • There should probably be an article about the plant the Iskalloni used to make the mutagen.
    • Created.
  • "However, the Iskalloni made little advances in their cybernetic technology over the years." You should probably change this to "few advances", because the way it is now it seems like they did make advances, although they were small.
    • Changed.
  • There should be an article on the New Republic ship Farege lured in to Iskalloni space.
    • Created.
  • That's all. Good job. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 19:45, September 18, 2010 (UTC)
Prepare to be savaged...
  • Just one for now: The final sentence of "Biology and appearance" seems more appropriate for "Society and culture." Will finish reviewing soon! ~ SavageBob 00:55, September 23, 2010 (UTC)
    • I see it as kinda in-between the two sections, but whatever. Moved.
  • Do they have game stats in their WEG appearances? If so, a summary is in order for BTS (stronger or weaker than Humans, more or less agile, most know how to fire blasters, etc.). ~ SavageBob 01:00, September 23, 2010 (UTC)
    • Not much to say here, but I've included a mention. I'm not much of a roleplayer, but I guess there's nothing special in their stats.
  • "the unexplored Iskallon system." Even the Iskalloni hadn't explored it?
    • Addressed.
  • Does the OS use the term "Iskalloni space"? If so, I'd at least stub an article with that name. ~ SavageBob 02:28, September 23, 2010 (UTC)
    • The adventure uses the term—though it calls it "Iskallon space"—but I'm not sure if an article is appropriate. We don't know what this space is; it can refer to the space near Iskadrell, the entire Iskallon system or more. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 16:27, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 20:33, September 29, 2010 (UTC)