Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Invasion of the Minos Cluster

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Invasion of the Minos Cluster

(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Plagueis327 16:30, March 1, 2012 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Nice work.—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 23:20, March 10, 2012 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote This Artoo unit has a good motivator! Menkooroo 03:35, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
  4. Coruscantfan (Talk) 21:02, April 18, 2012 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Very well done. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 00:29, April 25, 2012 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote --Eyrezer 19:57, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Object

In the army now
  • The infobox lists the Imperial Army as the Sith's fighting force during this campaign, but the article itself is a bit vague on who the Jedi are fighting and doesn't mention or link the Imperial Army at all.
    • Oops! It's was the last sentence of the prelude and the final paragraph of "The long haul", but I've added another mention in "Early Fighting."
      • I think you might have mistakenly read Imperial Military; I'm looking for the Imperial Army. :) Menkooroo 17:56, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
  • Even though the end of the BTS's first paragraph is a self-sourcing sentence, all other such sentences are reffed in "Behind the scenes;" could this one get a ref for consistency?
    • Done and done.
  • Not an objection: The explanatory refs varied between past and present tense, so I made them all present. Obviously feel free to change to past if they'll read better that way, but if so, change everything.
    • Thanks for that. I usually prefer to keep them in the present. I clearly just futzed up this time.
  • Not an objection to this article per se, but given the revelation in Gnost-Dural's journal, should the Great Galactic War template still list this as "First" Minos Cluster? Great work! Menkooroo 03:59, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 19:57, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, I plan to kill those two redlinks eventually. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 05:17, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

  • Not really worth an objection, but on the quote for the aftermath, is there no punctuation mark in the source, or was this simply a typo? Secondly, I assume that the quote for "Early fighting" that read "Minos Cluster and ther heroism and sacrifice of the Jedi" was meant to read "Minos Cluster and the heroism and sacrifice of the Jedi"?—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 23:20, March 10, 2012 (UTC)