Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Hogrum Chalk

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Hogrum Chalk

  • Nominated by: Menkooroo 14:05, September 23, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: He's come a long way since he was GA'd.

(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 10:34, January 4, 2012 (UTC)
  2. —Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 04:00, January 11, 2012 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote CC7567 (talk) 06:35, January 13, 2012 (UTC)
  4. Plagueis327 02:01, January 21, 2012 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:16, February 27, 2012 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 04:14, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Attack of the Clone
  • Is the Attack on the Hidden Temple officially name? That article seems to indicate that it is, but I just want to make sure because it can't be referred to as such in Chalk's article if it's not. CC7567 (talk) 06:01, January 13, 2012 (UTC)
    • Aye. Legacy War 3 calls it that in narrative text. Thanks for the review! Menkooroo 06:08, January 13, 2012 (UTC)
      • Alrighty, just wanted to make sure. :) CC7567 (talk) 06:35, January 13, 2012 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • A couple minor things. Where the P/T mentions the Attack on the Hidden Temple, I feel like maybe some very brief context would help provide some refresher familiarity for more casual readers, saving them from having to go back into the article or another article to see what that conflict entailed exactly.
    • Good catch; "outcome" is a little vague. I think I've now made it clear what Fel was upset about and what Chalk was cheery about.
  • In the interest of uniformity, I notice the quote in the P/A section refers to the character's full name, while every other quote, save the first in the bio, refers to him by just "Chalk." It's not really a huge deal, but would you consider either referring to him by his full name throughout or using just "Chalk" there? Personally, I'd prefer to the former, but your choice. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:18, February 26, 2012 (UTC)
    • I've changed "Roan Fel" to "Emperor Fel" in Powers and abilities, and shortened "Hogrum Chalk" to "Chalk" in equipment, but I added a bit of context after "Chalk" that seemed a little necessary and also made it a bit more interesting. Thanks for the review, and sorry if I've spoiled the end of Legacy: War for you. :P Menkooroo 00:50, February 27, 2012 (UTC)
      • Nah, it's not exactly high on my reading list. :P Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:16, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 05:12, March 16, 2012 (UTC)