Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Heist in Capital City

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Mission in Capital City

  • Nominated by: Brandon Rhea(talk) 03:32, December 28, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: The first FAN for Star Wars Rebels!

(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. I'll probably make the Ezra's Gamble article soon. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:47, January 15, 2015 (UTC)
  2. Nice! Nivlacanator(talk) 05:06, April 29, 2015 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote IRC reviewed. IFYLOFD (Talk) 01:25, June 4, 2015 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:13, July 21, 2015 (UTC)
  5. Coruscantfan (Talk) 15:57, July 22, 2015 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 00:43, July 27, 2015 (UTC)
  7. - AV-6R7 (talk) 00:51, July 27, 2015 (UTC)

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Ayrehead
  • Instead of the previous mission being the conflict on Gorse, would the events of Ezra's Gamble be more appropriate? According to Star Wars Rebels: Rebel Journal by Ezra Bridger they short time before the heist and since both involve Bridger it seems relevant. I'm not sure if Gladiator Night would be a suitable article to include all of those events or if another more broad article would be needed like Hunt for Gronson Takkaro or something. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:22, January 8, 2015 (UTC)
    • Hmm. Gladiator Nights (or whatever the page ends up being called) could work if you wanted to go for Ezra-centric. On the other hand, we could go for rebel-centric (that was why I included Gorse) and could create an article for Sabine's attack on the TIE landing pat from "Art Attack." The Rebellion Begins mentions that Sabine got onto the Lothal most wanted list because of that attack, so it's notable enough (unlike "Entanglement" and "Property of Ezra Bridger," which happen after "Art Attack" and don't really seem relevant enough for an article). So when considering relevance to the rebels, since the heist was a rebel attack first and foremost, that seems like the most logical candidate. What do you think? - Brandon Rhea(talk) 05:47, January 14, 2015 (UTC)
      • Either would work for me, and equally I think including both might be fine as well, I'll leave it up to you. The Gorse conflict just seemed somewhat distant. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:55, January 14, 2015 (UTC)
        • Added the airfield for now. Once something from Ezra's Gamble is created, I'll add that too. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 06:05, January 15, 2015 (UTC)
  • Should the Lothal Year date from the Star Wars Rebels: The Visual Guide be included somewhere? Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:22, January 8, 2015 (UTC)
    • I could if you feel it's important enough. I try to shy away from using it's not well known to readers, and talking about the event's relation to the Battle of Yavin is much clearer. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 05:47, January 14, 2015 (UTC)
      • I've seen it in other articles and thought it might be consistent, but to be honest Yavin makes more sense, since we're probably going to be changing it to BBY soonish anyway. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:55, January 14, 2015 (UTC)
  • Quite a lot of linking is missing. In the infobox alone, Years, food and Lothal rebels need to be linked. The Lothal system may also need linking for the orbit of Lothal, but I'm not sure. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:22, January 8, 2015 (UTC)
    • Added the ones you mentioned (though linking to Lothal system seems a bit of a stretch). I'll fill in the redlink for foodstuff. If there's more then please feel free to add them. This seems like a sofixit. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 05:47, January 14, 2015 (UTC)
      • Anymore that I spot I'll add myself, but I thought since there were several it'd be worth pointing out. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:55, January 14, 2015 (UTC)
  • TIE fighters need to be included in the forces section of the infobox, and probably Yogar Lyste as well. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:22, January 8, 2015 (UTC)
  • In the quote for aftermath "could signify something more than the left of a few crates", is this meant to be theft or loss of a few creates? Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:22, January 8, 2015 (UTC)
  • "The Ghost later to Lothal, scrambling its signal", I think you're missing a returned or something here. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:22, January 8, 2015 (UTC)
  • In the final paragraph of aftermath could you change the word rebels to something else in some of its uses, like the group or the crew of the ghost? It seems a little repetitive. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:22, January 8, 2015 (UTC)
  • Some kind of category for the various Rebel missions seems like it would be useful but I'm not sure exactly what it should be. Lothal battles could work, although not all of the events would necessarily fit. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:22, January 8, 2015 (UTC)
    • If a category was to be created, it would probably have to be something like "Missions of the Ghost." - Brandon Rhea(talk) 05:47, January 14, 2015 (UTC)
Fan of the Core
  • Under "Prelude" you have Bridger, a 14-year-old orphan sourced to "Spark of Rebellion" and I can't remember does it say in the episode he is 14 years old or is that from a different source? Coruscantfan (Talk) 18:45, June 26, 2015 (UTC)
    • Good point. Added a different source to his age. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 15:24, June 27, 2015 (UTC)
SE
  • Under "The heist", can you specify that the detonator was left on one of the bikes? Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:03, July 20, 2015 (UTC)

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