Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Grievous's frigate (third nomination)

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Grievous's frigate

  • Nominated by: Lewisr (talk) 04:04, 29 March 2025 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Sorted the remaining objection on the last nom, towing up so to get it out of former status
  • Date Archived: 20:09, 14 April 2025 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 1340 words (171 introduction, 976 body, 193 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 1203 words (169 introduction, 931 body, 103 behind the scenes)
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(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)

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Support votes

  1. Inqvote Objections handled pre-nom via Discord.—spookywillowwtalk 01:49, 31 March 2025 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Wok142 (talk) 00:30, 10 April 2025 (UTC)
  3. Thanks for being willing to listen to my rambling about B1 animation errors Lew :P Editoronthewiki (talk) 21:31, 12 April 2025 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote OOM 224 22:55, 12 April 2025 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 15:59, 14 April 2025 (UTC)
  6. Booply (talk) 20:08, 14 April 2025 (UTC)

Objections

Editor
  • The animation errors I pointed out to you aboard the bridge should be accounted for in the BTS Editoronthewiki (talk) 02:47, 2 April 2025 (UTC)
Wok
  • Here's my copyedit for review, did a fair amount of sentence re-shuffling.
  • Context for Clone Wars can be added for both body and intro.
  • Are all the events described in the intro dated to 22 BBY? It's kind of implied but I think it could be good to restate at least once to make it clear.
    • How's that now? Lewisr (talk) 23:32, 6 April 2025 (UTC)
  • This part confuses me: "Grievous used his frigate fleet, which included his own frigate, to force the Republic out of hyperspace and into a brief skirmish before reaching Bothawui. Adapting the strategy once the Republic still reached Bothawui, Grievous stopped pursuing Skywalker.." - was his plan to prevent the Republic from reaching Bothawui, which is why he pivoted his plan due to his inability to prevent them from reaching it? If so, I think "before reaching Bothawui" in that first sentence can be re-worded to make it explicit that Grievous was trying to stop the Republic from getting there.
    • Does that work for you now? Lewisr (talk) 23:32, 6 April 2025 (UTC)
      • Excellent. Wok142 (talk) 17:55, 7 April 2025 (UTC)
  • The crewmembers listed in the infobox are not mentioned in the body currently.
    • They are mentioned in the commanders and crew section, but weren't linked, did add the links to them though Lewisr (talk) 23:32, 6 April 2025 (UTC)
  • Would the dates be needed for the "battles present for" infobox section, similar to our recent conversation on Plan 55/Widowmaker/Danaan tactics? Wok142 (talk) 22:08, 4 April 2025 (UTC)
    • Long standing precedent for this on ships is to not include Lewisr (talk) 23:32, 6 April 2025 (UTC)

Comments

  • There are several animation errors aboard the frigate's bridge in regards to B1 models. If that is relevant to this page, I can guide Lew through adding it to the BTS Editoronthewiki (talk) 01:52, 31 March 2025 (UTC)

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 20:09, 14 April 2025 (UTC)