- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Grael
- Nominated by: -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 01:52, 7 August 2008 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Force-sensitive commando, meter tall, furry skin, short nom, nice story, what's not to like?
(6 Inqs/0 Users/6 Total)
Support
Greyman(Talk) 07:01, 10 August 2008 (UTC)- Now, if they canonize him as the Ewok Jedi, that would be great! - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 15:27, 10 August 2008 (UTC)
- Chack Jadson (Talk) 20:04, 15 August 2008 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:21, 29 August 2008 (UTC)- Master Aban Fiolli {Alpheridies University ComNet} 01:37, 31 August 2008 (UTC)
- -- Darth Culator (Talk) 01:47, 31 August 2008 (UTC)
Oppose
I'm fairly certain there is another image of Grael out there... --Eyrezer 06:19, 7 August 2008 (UTC)- Yes, there are two more. I'll try to get Culator to scan them soon. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 12:35, 7 August 2008 (UTC)
- Images have been added, courtesy of Darth Culator. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 16:07, 30 August 2008 (UTC)
- Sweet potatoes, and I second Cav. --Eyrezer 06:52, 31 August 2008 (UTC)
- Images have been added, courtesy of Darth Culator. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 16:07, 30 August 2008 (UTC)
- Yes, there are two more. I'll try to get Culator to scan them soon. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 12:35, 7 August 2008 (UTC)
- From the squadron briefing of Cavalier One:
Is there an article for the Tribe Panshee village? If so, it needs to be linked to. If not, then it should be created.- Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 08:13, 8 August 2008 (UTC)- Linked to and created. :-) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 21:48, 8 August 2008 (UTC)
- Stuff:
Context on yootak in the body.- Added.
Anything you can link to for "long-armed black creatures"?- Nothing to link to, but I added a description.
Context on location of the prison in the body when first mentioned.- Changed it a bit; is that what you're looking for?
- Very nice job. This light-hearted story seems pretty funny. Chack Jadson (Talk) 19:00, 12 August 2008 (UTC)
- Thank you. Yep, it is certainly entertaining. :) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 19:11, 12 August 2008 (UTC)
- Toprawa:
Very redundant, please reword/condense: "There, he was introduced to a golden protocol droid, which was fluent in Ewokese. Grael introduced himself to the droid"- Reworded.
Some kind of context is needed for his flute/musical abilities here. Nothing in the biography really establishes that he has this flute, or why: "Grael still had possession of his flute"- Better?
After going through and linking some things, you now have some redlink issues. Please kill the musician red link in the intro, and I think you still may have 4 in the bio.Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:16, 25 August 2008 (UTC)- Created musician and bread; "Balis-Baurgh system" didn't need to be linked because Balis-Baurgh is the system, oddly enough. Should only be three left. Thanks for the review. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 19:20, 28 August 2008 (UTC)
Powers and abilities section needed? --Eyrezer 07:09, 31 August 2008 (UTC)- I wouldn't say so. All we really know is that he could use the Force to sense his prey, etc, and that he was a talented musician and hunter. It's all mentioned in the bio/P&T, and a P&A would be quite repetitive and short, I think. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 11:37, 31 August 2008 (UTC)
- Sounds good enough for me. --Eyrezer 23:14, 31 August 2008 (UTC)
- I wouldn't say so. All we really know is that he could use the Force to sense his prey, etc, and that he was a talented musician and hunter. It's all mentioned in the bio/P&T, and a P&A would be quite repetitive and short, I think. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 11:37, 31 August 2008 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 18:17, 1 September 2008 (UTC)