Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Gorin

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Gorin

Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:33, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
Nomination comments: My first Star Wars: The Rise and Fall of the Galactic Empire nom is a big update on how useless everyone thought Gorin was
Date Archived: 07:10, 28 September 2024 (UTC)
Final word count: 1224 words (222 introduction, 924 body, 78 behind the scenes)
Word count at nomination time: 1227 words (222 introduction, 927 body, 78 behind the scenes)
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In the intro and the body, I would like to see the wording "served as Orbital Command" to be changed to something like "led Orbital Command" since Orbital Command is not a rank or title, but a unit. So Gorin isn't the unit itself, he is leading it.
- I don't think there's evidence for that in The Rebel Files, which just has "ORBITAL COMMAND: ADM. GORIN" which suggests that Gorin is the orbital command. There's nothing describing it as a unit or listing anyone else as a member. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:54, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
  - Ok well in that case all good. Wok142 (talk) 22:29, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
~~Context and linking needed for the Profundity~~ Wok142 (talk) 19:50, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
- Added that it's specifically the rebel flagship, but not sure what linking you're refering to. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:54, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
  - My bad I completely missed it in the beginning section. I thought the first time it was mentioned was in the bottom part but my mistake. Wok142 (talk) 22:29, 24 September 2024 (UTC)

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 07:10, 28 September 2024 (UTC)