Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Gersolik

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Gersolik

• Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 23:06, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: 1037 words
• Date Archived: 16:41, 1 April 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 1059 words (157 introduction, 871 body, 31 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 1060 words (158 introduction, 871 body, 31 behind the scenes)
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Support

1. Dentface (talk) 23:11, 6 October 2022 (UTC)
2. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 16:22, 1 February 2023 (UTC)
3. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 13:09, 15 February 2023 (UTC)
4. —spookywilloww^talk 23:46, 31 March 2023 (UTC)
5. BloodOfIrizi^(Syndicure) 01:12, 1 April 2023 (UTC)
6. Samonic ^(Talk) 07:52, 1 April 2023 (UTC)
7. I love semi-colons; the usage here is almost excessive. Others'll certainly advise against such practices but hey, that ain't me ;P OOM 224 (he/him) 16:38, 1 April 2023 (UTC)

Object

Dent

• In the section "Dumplings and a plan," you link the ingredients for "the drink component" but not the drink itself. (Denta bean beverage) Dentface (talk) 23:20, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Added.
• The audiobook needs to be in the appearances section. Dentface (talk) 23:20, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Oops. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 00:46, 4 October 2022 (UTC)

Luca

• I'd prefer to see the mention of the "scars" in P&T rather than in Biography.
  • Done.
• The intro could expand upon how the situation came to an end (I.e. the "awaited guests" arriving).
  • Expanded.
• Please cite Ultimate Star Wars, New Edition, if it contains the same information about Alderaan being a planet. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 07:13, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
  • Done. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 05:15, 27 January 2023 (UTC)

Braha

• Could you give some context for Cloud City? Specifically because you're mentioning a city in respect to a planet that's not very terrestrial. To add to it as well, "on the gas giant Bespin" feels a bit inconsistent in that respect when you use "on." Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 09:19, 3 February 2023 (UTC)
  • Gave it a tweak. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 21:59, 12 February 2023 (UTC)
• Thoughts on this? I had specifically wanted to make sure the Empire was introduced with it's full name like it was in the intro, and that "Imperial" wasn't the one being pipelinked when the proper name is being used straight after. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 14:09, 14 February 2023 (UTC)
  • Fine with me, thanks. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 16:01, 14 February 2023 (UTC)

Ziara

• would you be against an image in "dumplings and a plan" subsection? maybe one of cloud city perhaps BloodOfIrizi^(Syndicure) 23:52, 31 March 2023 (UTC)
  • Sure, added. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 00:02, 1 April 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 16:41, 1 April 2023 (UTC)