Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Gelesi

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Gelesi

• Nominated by: NaruHina ^Talk 18:41, 23 July 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Just because.

(1 Inqs/1 Users/2 Total/INQCON 1)

Support

1. IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 02:12, 3 August 2009 (UTC)
2. Looks good, Naru.--Jedi Kasra (talk) 18:07, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. IFYLOFD:
   • Infobox not fully sourced.
     • Fixed
   • In the intro: Why was the Exile in a rush to leave the planet?
     • Fixed
       • Don't just remove it, mention why. She was escaping attacks by Vaklu's troops and turrets. IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 01:45, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
         • Alright, fixed. NaruHina ^Talk 07:16, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
   • "He was promoted to captain in the Onderonian military—the youngest of three, together with Bostuco and Riiken" The three what?
     • Reworded
   • Why would the Onderon military frame the Ebon Hawk for starting the conflict?
     • Added
   • Mention what year this all takes place in.
     • Added
   • Bio and P&T quotes?
     • Added.
   • "At the request of a Vaklu supporter named Anda, the Exile can remove the three captains of the Guard in order to weaken the Royalist military in preparation for the attack on the Royal Palace. Anda is willing to pay the Exile 2500 credits for each one she removes" Place this somewhere else in the BtS.
     • I'm not sure what you mean, where else could I put it?
       • I would switch it with the "Siding with Talia is the canonical path" one. IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 01:45, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
         • Done. NaruHina ^Talk 07:16, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
   • IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 04:15, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

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