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Gavyn Sykes
- Nominated by: QuiGonJinn
(Talk) 20:21, September 6, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: I've been procrastinating for far too long on this.
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Nice work. Smiling fellow, isn't he? --Eyrezer 12:16, September 18, 2010 (UTC)
IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 22:31, September 18, 2010 (UTC)- "Qui-Gon Jinn, glad you made it. You've been well trained."--ID-21 Dolphin 12:45, September 19, 2010 (UTC)
— Fiolli 14:03, November 11, 2010 (UTC)- 1358 (Talk) 20:49, December 20, 2010 (UTC)
CC7567 (talk) 20:59, December 31, 2010 (UTC)
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Eyrezer
Just one from me. You seem to say at some points that Sykes and Kael organised the Naboo Resistance, while at others you place them in charge of a Resistance cell. The latter seems more likely to me. Could you clarify which it is? The Naboo Underground lists a number of other people as its leaders, and is clearly involved in far more activities than Sykes and Kael get up to. --Eyrezer 12:27, September 15, 2010 (UTC)- Tweaked it a bit. QuiGonJinn
(Talk) 12:06, September 18, 2010 (UTC)
- Naboo Resistance and Naboo Underground have been separated. SinisterSamurai 20:13, December 30, 2010 (UTC)
- Tweaked it a bit. QuiGonJinn
Toprawa
The Insider 97 and 112 Source list items should specify specific articles in the magazine. Please find out which they are and add them in with the Insider citation template. Odds are we already have articles for the relevant magazine department.- Addressed.
Star Wars Blogs are not Source list items. They belong in the External links section, per the Layout Guide.Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:37, November 12, 2010 (UTC)- I realize that; that's why I've already linked to Simpson's blog in the External links. However, I also believe that this particular entry deserves to be treated as a source, as it contains an official word from Leland Chee. What do you think? QuiGonJinn
(Talk) 17:47, November 12, 2010 (UTC)
- It should still go in the Ex Links. That's how we handle them at the moment. --Eyrezer 11:32, December 21, 2010 (UTC)
- Fixed, then. QuiGonJinn
(Talk) 19:08, December 21, 2010 (UTC)
- These look good, and sorry for the delay. I hope to give the article a full review once I have a little time in the near future, but unfortunately I can't make any promises. Will do my best. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:51, December 21, 2010 (UTC)
- Fixed, then. QuiGonJinn
- It should still go in the Ex Links. That's how we handle them at the moment. --Eyrezer 11:32, December 21, 2010 (UTC)
- I realize that; that's why I've already linked to Simpson's blog in the External links. However, I also believe that this particular entry deserves to be treated as a source, as it contains an official word from Leland Chee. What do you think? QuiGonJinn
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 20:59, December 31, 2010 (UTC)
- Credits go to Chack Jadson, Borsk Fey'lya, and Xicer9 for checking the sources, and of course to Master Jonathan for yet another great copyedit. QuiGonJinn
(Talk) 20:21, September 6, 2010 (UTC)