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Freedon Nadd
- Nominated by: —Tommy 9281 13:23, July 23, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Tryin to get that old thing back. Here's to you, WP:TOTJ!
(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)
Support
Pre-nom and all that. Xicer9(Combadge) 15:57, July 23, 2010 (UTC)
- Excellent work, Tommy.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 00:39, July 25, 2010 (UTC)
Magnificent. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 00:34, August 26, 2010 (UTC)
Per them. Chack Jadson (Talk) 15:15, September 16, 2010 (UTC)- Good, good. The dark side is strong with you...--ID-21 Dolphin
(Talk) 23:50, September 19, 2010 (UTC)
Cylka-talk- 04:34, September 21, 2010 (UTC)
Object
Trayus
A small one for now: Is the Jedi Civil War section aptly named? The events described take place several years after the conflict's official end. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 21:09, July 24, 2010 (UTC)
Cylka
Nadd followed his feelings and eventually came across - could you make this a clearer that Nadd literally followed his feelings, in a physical sense.- Addressed.
You talk about the Ketos coming to Onderon with a stolen spellbook, and then a couple of lines later you say that Nadd returned the spellbook to them. When was it taken from them? This needs to be cleared up.- Addressed.
- Absolutely fantastic article, Tommy! Cylka-talk- 22:38, September 19, 2010 (UTC)
Comments
- Before anyone asks, no, there is not any extra BtS information to be added. No interviews, no new tidbits from obscure sources, nothing. Believe me, trust me, I checked. Many thanks to Xicer9 for his assistance in that endeavor.—Tommy 9281 13:23, July 23, 2010 (UTC)
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 04:34, September 21, 2010 (UTC)