Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Fortressa

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Fortressa

  • Nominated by: Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 14:47, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I considered this for a while. And then Warfare mentioned it. So that was that.

(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote --Eyrezer 11:56, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 00:24, April 14, 2012 (UTC)
  3. Clone Commander Lee Talk 11:06, April 17, 2012 (UTC)
  4. Nice man JangFett (Talk) 01:09, April 19, 2012 (UTC)
  5. Plagueis327 19:24, April 20, 2012 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote There is no stopping this man! Menkooroo 20:13, May 5, 2012 (UTC)
  7. 501st dogma(talk) 20:25, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Jangeth
  • The war was eventually won by the Republic," While minor, I don't believe it was directly said that the Republic itself won the war, due to Palpatine controlling both sides and the Empire emerging. Possibly you could reflect on just the Republic transitioning into the Empire instead.
    • I felt that mention of the end of the war was needed, so I expanded the reference to include Order 66 and the execution of the Separatist Council without mentioning that the war was specifically won by the Republic. How's that?
      • Yeah, that works with ROTS. JangFett (Talk) 01:09, April 19, 2012 (UTC)
  • "Around eighty X-wings broke through the first TIE line, but they were soon destroyed by the second wave of Imperial fighters launched by the station" It sounds like the Death Star itself launched the fighters. :P Perhaps you could say launched from the station? JangFett (Talk) 00:28, April 18, 2012 (UTC)
Fleets
  • Would Trade Federation Defense Fleet and Confederate Navy not be appropriate for the "Fleet" field of the infobox? If so, could the former get some love in the body?
    • Added to infobox, and added links where appropriate in the body.
  • That its class is "Star Destroyer" is exclusive to the infobox.
    • Done.
  • Smooooooooth. Menkooroo 03:52, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 20:27, May 5, 2012 (UTC)