Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/First Battle of Empress Teta

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Battle of Koros Major

(5 Inq/2 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote Nominated. Greyman(Talk) 16:49, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
  2. Chack Jadson (Talk) 15:28, 22 March 2008 (UTC)
  3. Another speedily-handled list of objections. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:46, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote The Seven Habits of Highly Effective Empress Teta... Gonk (Gonk!) 19:56, 27 March 2008 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Addressed via IRC. Master Aban Fiolli {Alpheridies University ComNet} 00:47, 28 March 2008 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote No complaints here. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 02:55, 29 March 2008 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote Queue this thing. -- Darth Culator (Talk) 02:08, 31 March 2008 (UTC)

Object

  1. I don't get this sentence: "Unaware that the shrapnel had been imbued with Sith magic, Sunrider was able to use the Force to bind her fellow Jedi's wounds." What happened to Qel-Droma? Perhaps put something about it in "Aftermath". Chack Jadson (Talk) 22:58, 20 March 2008 (UTC)
    • Reworded that particular sentence to give a wee bit 'o context. Greyman(Talk) 12:56, 21 March 2008 (UTC)
  2. Toprawa:
    • Please either add a little bit to this sentence, or tack it to the end of the first paragraph to avoid one sentence paragraphs. "The First Battle of Empress Teta was often seen as one of several events that precipitated the Krath Holy Crusade, which was a part of the larger war against the rise of the Sith."
      • Merged, as suggested :) Greyman Jan.png (Talk) 20:25, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
    • Same as above. Please add/move to avoid one sentence paragraph: "Under the Jedi's leadership, a joint Republic-Jedi task force was assembled and dispatched in an attempt to halt the Krath advance"
    • Is there a specific fleet that "fleet" can be pipelinked to? Some Republic fleet, maybe? "With Ulic Qel-Droma and Fleet Captain Vanicus directing the joint Republic-Jedi fleet,"
      • No specific fleet is named in the comics/sources. Just that a Republic and Jedi fleet was dispatched to deal with the threat. Greyman Jan.png (Talk) 23:38, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
    • Additionally, I think it would benefit the article to include a description of ships that comprised the fleet, as supplemented by the infobox.
      • Resolved via IRC. Greyman Jan.png (Talk) 23:38, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
    • Please expound a little bit on what was decided at the Deneba conclave in "Aftermath" section. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:26, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
  3. Er, that's not a Hammerhead-class cruiser in the main pic. It's a Class VI freighter. -- Darth Culator (Talk) 00:13, 28 March 2008 (UTC)
    • Oops, my mistake. Changed links/info to suit the Class VI freighter. Thanks for pointing that out to me. Greyman Jan.png (Talk) 00:25, 28 March 2008 (UTC)

Comments

Approved by Inquisitorius 17:46, 31 March 2008 (UTC)