Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Feyn Vann (second nomination)

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Contents

  • 1 Feyn Vann
    • 1.1 (4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Macaroni
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Feyn Vann

  • Nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 02:48, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: That full set of scientists gets closer and closer every day.
  • Date Archived: 06:10, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 1185 words (176 introduction, 773 body, 236 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 1213 words (176 introduction, 808 body, 229 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:AMB

(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)

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Support

  1. Inqvote Lewisr (talk) 01:07, 23 September 2024 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Fan26 (Talk) 00:45, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:49, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 02:43, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
  5. CometSmudge (talk) 05:10, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
  6. Booply (talk) 06:07, 3 October 2024 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni
  • I don't understand the last bit here: "Vann worked to create an energy beam at the end of the Death Star's kyber crystal bombardment." What is a "kyber crystal bombardment"?
    • That is mostly what Geektionary does say, but shifted some of the words around to read easier.—spookywillowwtalk 20:16, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
  • I don't think you need to mention the deflectors again in the Equipment section. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 11:09, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
    • Removed.—spookywillowwtalk 20:16, 30 September 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 06:10, 3 October 2024 (UTC)