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Feyn Vann
- Nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 02:48, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: That full set of scientists gets closer and closer every day.
- Date Archived: 06:10, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
- Final word count: 1185 words (176 introduction, 773 body, 236 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 1213 words (176 introduction, 808 body, 229 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:AMB
(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)
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Support
Lewisr (talk) 01:07, 23 September 2024 (UTC)
Fan26 (Talk) 00:45, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:49, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 02:43, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
- CometSmudge (talk) 05:10, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
- Booply (talk) 06:07, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
Object
Macaroni
I don't understand the last bit here: "Vann worked to create an energy beam at the end of the Death Star's kyber crystal bombardment." What is a "kyber crystal bombardment"?- That is mostly what Geektionary does say, but shifted some of the words around to read easier.—spookywillowwtalk 20:16, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
I don't think you need to mention the deflectors again in the Equipment section.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 11:09, 30 September 2024 (UTC)- Removed.—spookywillowwtalk 20:16, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 06:10, 3 October 2024 (UTC)