Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Elbo

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Elbo

  • Nominated by: -- Cull Tremayne 02:06, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Ah, the creepy uncle of Star Wars.

(5 Inqs/0 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote Huh. Greyman(Talk) 14:32, 9 October 2008 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote —Xwing328(Talk) 03:30, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote --Eyrezer 07:03, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Under da sea! Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 04:36, 8 November 2008 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote -- Darth Culator (Talk) 05:34, 8 November 2008 (UTC)

Object

  1. From the cockpit of Xwing328:
    • File:Crab King.jpg has an image improvement tag on it.
      • I'll upload another version, but it'll still be basically the same VHS quality.
    • So did the Ewoks convince Elbo to give the second test, as per the intro, or did Elbo convince the Ewoks to have Latara do a second test, as "The second test" seems to say? —Xwing328(Talk) 02:13, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
      • Elbo agreed to a second test, which he thought up, but the Ewoks' presence is what convinced him to give Kneesaa a second test. So...both really. Any suggestions on making it more clear? Cull Tremayne 02:41, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
        • Changing that one word makes it clearer, at least for me. —Xwing328(Talk) 03:26, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
  2. Overall I very enjoyable read. I'm glad I suggested it :p I wonder if you could add some further remarks in the first paragraph of the main bio about his kingdom; for instance, maybe some descriptive comments on his coral castle or the treasures and wealth he'd amassed or his numerous underlings/servants/monsters. Perhaps also explain whether his castle/kingdom was in water or if the passages etc were filled with air. It looks as though the Ewoks can breathe there. I guess I'm really after some detail that is not just describing the events unfolding. --Eyrezer 19:19, 18 October 2008 (UTC)
    • Beefed up the first paragraph with your suggestions. Turned out to be a bit more simple than I initially thought... :P Cull Tremayne 02:59, 25 October 2008 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 11:59, 8 November 2008 (UTC)