Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Dron

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Dron

(1 Inqs/1 Users/2 Total)

Support

  1. Jedi Kasra (comlink) 08:14, July 21, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Read and approved on the GAN. --Eyrezer 05:39, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Ooroo, Menk
  • There's a lot of pbp in the article that doesn't really seem relevant to Dron. Namely:
  • Everything from the sentence "Prior to the war" to the end of Onward to Ukio. Kenobi being puzzled, and his labeling of Dooku and Ventress as "troublemakers" seems extraneous to Dron's article --- can this entire bit be trimmed down?
  • A disturbance: "Reus found it suspect, Fisto supposed, Reus entertained the thought..." it almost seems like the article is about the battle, rather than about Dron. And even then, it's play-by-play.
  • "The liege came to the conclusion, Reus strongly cautioned, Captain McQuarrie informed them, the general relented..." is, again, pbp, and doesn't even involve Dron.
  • Basically, I think the article lacks salience, and should be trimmed down considerably to keep it relevant to Dron while still conveying the greater picture. You can do it! Menkooroo 02:45, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to remove nomination (Inq only)

  1. Inqvote Menkooroo's objections have been unaddressed for over three weeks now. --Eyrezer 05:32, September 16, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Sorry, but no activity. Cylka-talk- 05:34, September 16, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Grunny (talk) 05:39, September 16, 2010 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Chack Jadson (Talk) 14:19, September 16, 2010 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 14:19, September 16, 2010 (UTC)