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Dradan
- Nominated by: ~Savage
15:50, August 28, 2011 (UTC) - Nomination comments: Didn't expect this one to surpass 1,000 words, but there ya go. ~Savage
15:50, August 28, 2011 (UTC)
(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)
Support
--Eyrezer 01:41, September 5, 2011 (UTC)- That was a very interesting and fun read. Good job, Bob. Cal Jedi
(Personal Comm Channel) 01:12, September 23, 2011 (UTC)
Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 08:56, October 27, 2011 (UTC)
1358 (Talk) 08:44, October 30, 2011 (UTC)
CC7567 (talk) 04:35, November 7, 2011 (UTC)
Excellent.—Tommy 9281 Thursday, November 10, 2011, 18:36 UTC
Object
Attack of the Clone
Just one: "and possibly kill them" sounds rather speculative in its current form. Is this exactly what the source says? If not, I'd recommend perhaps finding a way to avoid the speculative tone.CC7567 (talk) 03:36, November 7, 2011 (UTC)- Well, it's unclear, I guess -- although failing the roll could possibly kill the character. I've changed it to the softer "harm." Thanks for the review! ~Savage
04:30, November 7, 2011 (UTC)
- Well, it's unclear, I guess -- although failing the roll could possibly kill the character. I've changed it to the softer "harm." Thanks for the review! ~Savage
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 18:36, November 10, 2011 (UTC)