Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Deadeye Duncan

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Deadeye Duncan

  • Nominated by: Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 17:26, September 11, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: This article was my first GA, but I realized I let out smal pieces of information here and there, which put it well over 1000 words.

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:26, September 19, 2011 (UTC)
  2. Looks like good stuff. Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 21:02, September 21, 2011 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Menkooroo 15:34, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote --Eyrezer 08:37, October 30, 2011 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote—Tommy 9281 Thursday, November 10, 2011, 18:54 UTC
  6. Inqvote CC7567 (talk) 06:13, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Floyd:
  • Just one thing: the intro could be expanded some.
  • IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 00:34, September 16, 2011 (UTC)
Deadeye steak
  • The new stuff looks great. I'm just wondering if there's any quote from the game that could be used for the "Equipment" section. Does he mention anything about his weapons to the player; does Gerlon say anything about him dropping his blaster?
    • I do not think that any of his equipment is ever mentioned in the dialogue, sorry.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 12:15, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
  • Can you use {{CSWECite}}, with the page number, for ref [4]? I can get you the page number if you need it.
    • Is this what you wanted?--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 12:15, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
      • And the name, too. I added it.
  • And one more thing: If Manaan and Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic are linked to in the BTS quote attribution, then the article should stay consistent and link everything that can be linked in quote attributions. Alternatively, you could jettison those links; I don't think we have policy on it, but most articles these days tend to not include links in quote attributions unless they're not linked elsewhere in the article, such as the unidentified male dueling fan. Menkooroo 07:54, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
  • Just one more thought --- I think there's room for one more image. In p&t, equipment, or even BTS. I could grab you a fairly good-quality, if small, screenshot from this video if you want to fool around with it and see if it'll fit into the article. There's a good shot of him stepping into the ring at 2:59. Let me know. Menkooroo 13:19, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
    • Sure, please go ahead and get the image, I thought it might need another one.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 14:08, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
      • Check out File:Duncandropsblaster.jpg. It could go in either P&t or Equipment, since it's a picture of him dropping his blaster. If you think the images are too crowded, you could even put it in BTS with a caption like "Deadeye Duncan in Knights of the Old Republic" or something. Also, now that there are three images, I demand an {{Imagecat}}! :) Menkooroo 15:18, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
Attack of the Clone
  • I usually don't object to intro size, but do you think it can be beefed up? The only reason I ask is because it doesn't seem very proportional to the rest of the article. (One to two sentences will probably do.)
  • "he had been trying to beat a duelist named Ice for years before the Sith attack on the Endar Spire": it sounds like this would be appropriate Bio information, too. CC7567 (talk) 04:39, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 06:13, November 11, 2011 (UTC)