Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Daye Azur-Jamin

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Daye Azur-Jamin

• Nominated by: -- AdmirableAckbar ^(Talk) 13:39, 25 June 2008 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(6 Inqs/0 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Greyman^(Talk) 18:59, 25 June 2008 (UTC)
2. Graestan^(Talk) 01:15, 29 June 2008 (UTC)
3. Master Aban Fiolli ^{{Alpheridies University ComNet}} 06:12, 7 July 2008 (UTC)
4. I always thought he died in Tinian on Trial. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 22:22, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
5. Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:56, 13 July 2008 (UTC)
6. Someone queue this mechanized freak. :-P -- Darth Culator ^(Talk) 03:08, 14 July 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

1. I think precedent demands putting File:Njo_dayeazur-jamin.jpg in the infobox, since it's the most recent canonical headshot and the one that's there is essentially the same quality. -- Darth Culator ^(Talk) 23:03, 28 June 2008 (UTC)
   • I'm seeing plenty of FAs that don't use the most recent canonical image, because there are other images more suitable for the infobox. This seems a similar case to me. The AJ image is more detailed, he's not wearing a hood, and he's looking at the "camera." -- AdmirableAckbar ^(Talk) 23:34, 28 June 2008 (UTC)
     • Eh, fair enough. It just seems a bit overloaded as it is, and the current infobox image is redundant if you keep File:OnlyDroidsServeTheMaker-title-AJ10p16.jpg in there. -- Darth Culator ^(Talk) 23:48, 28 June 2008 (UTC)
       • I altered it a bit, and removed the redundant image. Better? -- AdmirableAckbar ^(Talk) 20:21, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
2. From the Lava Refinery of Chack Jadson
   • Do we have an article for the slime Woyiq used?
     • Nope, unfortunately. The scene is told from Daye's POV, and he's too dazed to identify it other than "slime."
   • "...knowing Wookiees didn't live the most quiet lives." Can you rephrase this? A little less cliche and clarity would be nice.
     • Done.
   • "...attempting to kill her capacity to fall in love again." Please change this also. It sounds cheesy.
     • Blame Kathy Tyers for the cheesiness. :-P I've reworded it, though there's only so much I could do with the info provided.
   • You use "ultimately" in two consecutive sentences; the last two in the Bio in fact.
     • Heh. Axed one.
   • Nice article. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 01:38, 4 July 2008 (UTC)
     • Thank you. And thanks for the review. :-) -- AdmirableAckbar ^(Talk) 20:21, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
3. Toprawa:
   • I'd like to see a little bit added to the bio specifying the anti-energy field deal was meant to be used for stormtrooper armor. The intro specifies this, but not the bio.
     • Specified.
   • I'm not sure we need the brackets for the ellipses in your quote. Just the dots should suffice.
     • Brackets removed.
   • Can we link a battle to this invasion? "the Hutt homeworld of Nal Hutta was eventually conquered and invaded by the Yuuzhan Vong"
     • Linked.
   • Please clarify what this region is. A planetary region somewhere, a region of space, for example? "began investigating the region known as the Cloak of the Sith" Toprawa and Ralltiir 15:59, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
     • Clarified. Thanks for the review. -- AdmirableAckbar ^(Talk) 18:49, 12 July 2008 (UTC)
       • Glad to help. Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:56, 13 July 2008 (UTC)

Comments

• More images are on the way. -- AdmirableAckbar ^(Talk) 13:39, 25 June 2008 (UTC)
  • The only question I have is...was he or was he not redeemed?--Goodwood ^{(Alliance Intelligence)} 09:40, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
    • Read the BtS; it's an RPG scenario, and it's up to the gamemaster/players if he's redeemed or if they have to kill him. -- AdmirableAckbar ^(Talk) 11:02, 26 June 2008 (UTC)