- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Featured article nomination that was withdrawn. Please do not modify it.
Crofyp
- Nominated by: Samonic
(Talk) 18:43, 13 April 2023 (UTC) - Nomination comments: Crofyp's task force was my first GA
- Date Archived: 05:38, 30 July 2023 (UTC)
- Final word count: 1177 words (221 introduction, 934 body, 22 behind the scenes)
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Gonna object to the use of the word "instructed" in the intro, since context seems to imply to me it was more like Crofyp ordered the frigate commander to allow him to proceed.- I didn't think ordered was the right way to put it, so I changed it to threatened, how's that?
The final sentence of the intro is currently a bit long.- Fixed
" bring them to a rendezvous point Crofyp would specify"- what does this mean, exactly? It's Jixtus who is giving the orders, but does Crofyp have the prerogative to decide where the rendezvous is?Fan26 (Talk) 16:03, 6 June 2023 (UTC)- Unfortunately this is another instance where it's quite literally what the book says :P 'They didn't like him, they considered him vastly inferior to themselves, and they hadn't told him anything about their mission to Rapacc beyond the fact that he was to take them there and then guide them to a rendezvous point General Crofyp would specify.' Lewisr (talk) 19:22, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
- Objection(s) overridden by Inquisitorius 14:26, 26 June 2023 (UTC)
Comments
- Going to try help get this over the line, go easy :P Lewisr (talk) 20:31, 13 May 2023 (UTC)
- Recieved Discord takedown request.—spookywillowwtalk 05:38, 30 July 2023 (UTC)
Vote to strike objection (Inq only)
For Fan's.—spookywillowwtalk 02:27, 26 June 2023 (UTC)- JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:33, 26 June 2023 (UTC)
LucaRoR (Talk) 14:26, 26 June 2023 (UTC)
