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Coruscant Eastern Spaceport
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:12, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Updates are fun. Retcon updates merging two major subjects? Less so
- Date Archived: 02:00, 25 January 2025 (UTC)
- Final word count: 1470 words (218 introduction, 948 body, 304 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 1468 words (214 introduction, 950 body, 304 behind the scenes)
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Lewisr (talk) 19:10, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
Objection handled via Discord.—spookywillowwtalk 20:32, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
Wok142 (talk) 20:29, 7 January 2025 (UTC)
I hope we can get a Westport FAN, too. :P Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 06:03, 23 January 2025 (UTC)
- Booply (talk) 00:18, 25 January 2025 (UTC)
- Mor9347
(Talk) 01:58, 25 January 2025 (UTC)
Object
Wok
Here is my copyedit, tried to make some things be a bit smoother in a few spots- Looks good to me, thanks! Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:21, 7 January 2025 (UTC)
Separatist Crisis could use a date in the intro.- Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:21, 7 January 2025 (UTC)
In Terminals and transit cars, I think the location of the desk in the sentence "Directly in front of the car's sliding doors was a circular desk" should be described relative to a permanent structure as opposed to a car. You could say something like "Directly in front of the arrival area" or something like that. Same thing for this part: "above the car doors was a sign in Aurebesh" - does that make sense?- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:21, 7 January 2025 (UTC)
More of a question but in Imperial Era and beyond, should "eastern spaceport" be capitalized or are you just referring to it descriptive-wise and not as a proper noun? Just want to be sure about this.Wok142 (talk) 08:55, 7 January 2025 (UTC)- Was going with the description just for some variety, but can be changed if you'd prefer. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:21, 7 January 2025 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 01:59, 25 January 2025 (UTC)