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Clabburn the Elder
(5 Inqs/3 Users/8 Total)
Support
- Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:41, 8 March 2008 (UTC)
Graestan(Talk) 02:15, 9 March 2008 (UTC)
-- Darth Culator (Talk) 02:28, 10 March 2008 (UTC)- Ozzel 05:21, 10 March 2008 (UTC)
- You have a thing for Hoth. Chack Jadson (Talk) 19:15, 11 March 2008 (UTC)
--Eyrezer 10:05, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
Greyman(Talk) 19:09, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
Good job, Toprawa. Atarumaster88 (Talk page) 05:31, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
Oppose
That image is pretty terrible. Can another one be acquired? Graestan(Talk) 01:58, 9 March 2008 (UTC)- I uploaded a new version with far less artifacts. If necessary, I can upload a .png version instead (better quality, bigger file size). --Imperialles 02:12, 9 March 2008 (UTC)
- Much better.
- I uploaded a new version with far less artifacts. If necessary, I can upload a .png version instead (better quality, bigger file size). --Imperialles 02:12, 9 March 2008 (UTC)
- From the desk of Atarumaster88
Intro could use a couple more sentences, particularly regarding Malachite Stone and Clabburn the Younger.- Expanded intro, including the Malachite Stone. ;) Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:25, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
" apathetic treatment of others, especially those who had the unfortunate fate of falling victim to one of his raids". Apathetic doesn't seem to be a proper descriptive word. Apathy would imply he didn't care about others one way or another; your description in the bio might merit a "merciless" or "harsh", but that's just my opinion. I won't argue this one out.- I agree. Someone else changed it to "apathetic." Will change it back. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:45, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
Similar to above, I'm not sure about "In a word, Clabburn was ruthless, a trait not uncommon among the Mugaari, though he gave the concept new meaning."- Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88
(Talk page) 19:40, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
Comments
Approved by Inquisitorius 19:18, 20 March 2008 (UTC)
- There are no pictures for him. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:41, 8 March 2008 (UTC)