Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Clabburn the Elder

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Clabburn the Elder

(5 Inqs/3 Users/8 Total)

Support

  1. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:41, 8 March 2008 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Graestan(Talk) 02:15, 9 March 2008 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote -- Darth Culator (Talk) 02:28, 10 March 2008 (UTC)
  4. Ozzel 05:21, 10 March 2008 (UTC)
  5. You have a thing for Hoth. Chack Jadson (Talk) 19:15, 11 March 2008 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote --Eyrezer 10:05, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote Greyman(Talk) 19:09, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
  8. Inqvote Good job, Toprawa. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 05:31, 19 March 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

  1. That image is pretty terrible. Can another one be acquired? Graestan(Talk) 01:58, 9 March 2008 (UTC)
    • I uploaded a new version with far less artifacts. If necessary, I can upload a .png version instead (better quality, bigger file size). --Imperialles 02:12, 9 March 2008 (UTC)
      • Much better.
  2. From the desk of Atarumaster88
    • Intro could use a couple more sentences, particularly regarding Malachite Stone and Clabburn the Younger.
    • " apathetic treatment of others, especially those who had the unfortunate fate of falling victim to one of his raids". Apathetic doesn't seem to be a proper descriptive word. Apathy would imply he didn't care about others one way or another; your description in the bio might merit a "merciless" or "harsh", but that's just my opinion. I won't argue this one out.
      • I agree. Someone else changed it to "apathetic." Will change it back. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:45, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
    • Similar to above, I'm not sure about "In a word, Clabburn was ruthless, a trait not uncommon among the Mugaari, though he gave the concept new meaning."
    • Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 19:40, 18 March 2008 (UTC)

Comments

Approved by Inquisitorius 19:18, 20 March 2008 (UTC)