Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Bright Hope/Legends

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Bright Hope

(5 Inqs/5 Users/10 Total)

Support

  1. I've always liked this ship. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:23, 13 January 2008 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Graestan(Talk) 23:43, 15 January 2008 (UTC)
  3. --Eyrezer 01:54, 17 January 2008 (UTC)
  4. Well-written article and this article comes from the patchy EU background that most FAs seem to come out of these days. Good work. Regards, RelentlessRecusant (Talk) 02:03, 17 January 2008 (UTC)
  5. Chack Jadson (Talk) 21:41, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
  6. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 19:04, 24 January 2008 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote -- Darth Culator (Talk) 02:19, 27 January 2008 (UTC)
  8. Inqvote. You know, a Toprawa or Ralltiir FA from this user would be sort of interesting too, but this was a good read. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 22:32, 27 January 2008 (UTC)
  9. Inqvote Reading these random non-character articles can sometimes be rewarding. Greyman(Paratus) 23:58, 3 February 2008 (UTC)
  10. Inqvote Imperialles 19:40, 6 February 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

  1. From the squalid cubicle of Graestan:
    • File:Bright hope takeoff hoth.jpg should be re-uploaded in a better resolution.
      • Will be difficult for me to do, as I have no image capabilities whatsoever. If you would, please look at the link in the sources list for the CCG card, which is where the image comes from. That image is what was up there, changed to the CUSWE image you see now by Culator last night. Are they both unacceptable?
        • Done.
    • "Cost" in the infobox isn't something I'm crazy about…seems more like a class aspect, not an individual ship item.
      • Gone.
    • "Hacker droid" should be "slicer"—IU is predominantly slicer.
      • Duh.
    • Gallofree Yards, Inc. can be changed to Gallofree Yards as there is no mistaking it.
      • Done, though I've left it as is in the infobox.
    • Outline the fate of the crew in the intro.
      • Yeah.
    • "Clam-shelled" implies that it is actually in a clam's shell.
      • Changed to "clam shell-shaped"
        • Change it to "clamshell-shaped."
    • Last sentence of second paragraph of "Description" is a run-on.
      • Yeck.
    • "The transport's interior was mostly hollow, consisting of at least three modular decks, interchangeable between containing passengers and cargo"—Reword. Also, this smacks of a class statement, as well.
      • Revised.
    • Battle of Yavin link should be changed to one of the evacuation battles of Yavin 4.
      • Done.
    • I intensely dislike the name of "Mistakes and inconsistencies." Please change it to something less negative.
      • Though I have no sympathy or tolerance for continuity errors, changed to simply "Inconsistencies" Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:51, 14 January 2008 (UTC)
        • Sometime you should kick back and actually enjoy the Star Wars. :P
    • Graestan(Talk) 22:24, 14 January 2008 (UTC)
  2. From the desk of Atarumaster88
    • "She never expected any Rebel to leave a wounded comrade behind, but there seemed to be no alternative if the Bright Hope was to safely take off." Is this really necessary?
      • Agreed. Reworded to better fit the tone of the paragraph
    • Furthermore, was Farr in the ship and then ran back outside to grab some TDs, or was she still in the hangar? Clarify please.
      • I think I cleared this up. Lemme know
        • It works; I was confused when it said she was on the flight deck, and then she was back in the hangar blowing people up, but it makes more sense now. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 22:32, 27 January 2008 (UTC)
    • I seem to recall from the Tales of the Bounty Hunters that it wasn't just the most valuable people to the Rebellion jettisoned to Hoth; Farr balanced it out with people who could help them survive. That tidbit might be worth mentioning; I dunno.
      • Very true. Added a bit.
    • Slight nitpickiness- do all those known crewmembers really count since they were passengers?
      • Yeah, Eyrezer said the same thing earlier. Removed, and added the one notable passenger into the article. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:07, 27 January 2008 (UTC)
    • Have a Super Terrific Friendly Unfrustrating day. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 04:35, 27 January 2008 (UTC)

Comments

Approved by Inquisitorius 20:44, 8 February 2008 (UTC)