Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Blockade of the Rimma Trade Route

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Blockade of the Rimma Trade Route

  • Nominated by: Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 21:07, February 29, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Haven't nominated anything in quite a while...

(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Plagueis327 16:30, March 1, 2012 (UTC)
  2. 501st DogmaRepublic emblem(Comlink) 21:21, March 2, 2012 (UTC)
  3. Just make sure you remember to capitalize pipelinks. Otherwise, great job.—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 21:11, March 3, 2012 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Menkooroo 00:33, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
  5. Nice work. ~SavageBOB sig 14:03, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote --Eyrezer 11:16, April 15, 2012 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 23:25, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Object

501st
  • In the caption for the first picture, don't use "unpreparedness". Sounds wrong.
  • Otherwise, very good article. 501st DogmaRepublic emblem(Comlink) 21:51, March 1, 2012 (UTC)
    • Unpreparedness is a perfectly valid English word, and is less wordy than "lack of preparedness" or "lack of preparation." Thanks for the review, though. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 01:39, March 2, 2012 (UTC)
502nd
  • Excellent work. Very minor, but since every other referenced event is dated, could you date the Treaty of Coruscant, as well? I think it would be relevant to note how far in the future the Blockade was still being talked about in the Jedi Archives.
  • Not really an objection, but I recommend using {{WebCite}} for ref [9]. Access dates and the ability to preemptively add archived links, such as here, nip the potential problem of the site disappearing in the bud. Completely your choice, though. Menkooroo 19:15, March 8, 2012 (UTC)
    • Took care of the first. My only problem with the Citeweb template is that it conflicts with the {{TORweb}} template, which is already in place. For one reason or another, the archive.org links with that template don't seem to be working; I'll try fixing them up or finding someone who is more familiar with this stuff than I am to help me out. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 00:16, March 10, 2012 (UTC)
      • What was ref [9] at the time of my review is now ref [10] (the retail one that currently doesn't use any template). I'm A-OK with {{TORweb}} when it's applicable. :D Menkooroo 00:20, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

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