Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/BesGas Three

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BesGas Three

  • Nomination by: Thefourdotelipsis 00:27, 24 November 2008 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: In the words of Harry Secombe, "MORE!?"

(5 Inqs/0 users/5 total)

Support

  1. Inqvote Lord Hydronium 01:40, 29 November 2008 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Nice, boring GA. And wow, that is a meaty BTS. Cull Tremayne 06:18, 9 December 2008 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Chack Jadson (Talk) 19:58, 12 December 2008 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote --Eyrezer 17:16, 15 December 2008 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote It wasn't boring to me. ;-) Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 07:58, 21 December 2008 (UTC)

Object

  • The first paragraph of the BTS should be reworked to more accurately show the out of universe history of it: an (I believe) unidentified refinery appeared in a McQuarrie painting used in the ISWU, a refinery appeared in ESB, and "BesGas Three" appeared in Dark Nest, with the WTS submission form being the first to connect all three. - Lord Hydronium 08:42, 25 November 2008 (UTC)
  1. From the desk of Atarumaster88
    • "When the Confederacy attacked Bespin, independently operated harvesting platforms such as BesGas Three were destroyed, as the invaders hoped to commandeer the facilities for their own use" This does not make sense. They destroyed the facilities because they wanted to use them? Please clarify.
      • Changed to "neutralized," to reflect he DB wording.
    • If there were residential decks on BG3 in 36 ABY, does that mean that the place became crewed by sentients? If so, that should be noted.
      • That would be the implication, but it's not flat-out stated in the source. So I'll let readers of this make the same connection that readers of DNII would.
    • Otherwise good. Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 17:08, 16 December 2008 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 09:51, 21 December 2008 (UTC)