- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Belo Tusus
- Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 13:06, June 19, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: A GA of infinite jest. Word count is low. Be gentle.
(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)
Support
- Although the 19 BBY thing is somewhat shady… --Imperialles 17:37, June 19, 2010 (UTC)
CC7567 (talk) 20:44, June 19, 2010 (UTC)- Read and reviewed on the GAN page. --Eyrezer 23:35, June 19, 2010 (UTC)
- Xicer9
(Combadge) 01:17, June 20, 2010 (UTC) - Great article --Loneshark1138 (Talk) 16:22, June 20, 2010 (UTC)
- Read it on the GAN. -- 1358 (Talk) 10:44, June 21, 2010 (UTC)
- Menkooroo 07:39, June 24, 2010 (UTC)
Object
Xicer
Bts: "Jewhurst used the name of another Ortolan, Max Rebo, as the basis for his character's name—simple syllables, two maximum." Are you referring to Bees or Tusus here? Or both?- Both. Fixed.
Bts: "According to Jewhurst, the name "Belo Tusus" took approximately thirty seconds of fiddling around with letters." Took thirty seconds of fiddling to what? Come up with?- Yes, fixed.
Bts: "A Jedi Master, Kai Hudorra, who is in hiding, steals coin from the Ortolan's purse" It looks more like he steals the whole purse.- Changed.
- Great otherwise. Xicer9(Combadge) 23:12, June 19, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. :) Thefourdotelipsis 00:45, June 20, 2010 (UTC)
Not Xicer
First paragraph of "Usurper" --- does he really intend to seize control of the entire Republic??Menkooroo 07:11, June 23, 2010 (UTC)- Whoops. Fixed. Thefourdotelipsis 06:51, June 24, 2010 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 12:58, June 26, 2010 (UTC)