Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Battle of the City of Bone

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Battle of the City of Bone

(5 Inq/1 User/6 Total)

Support

1. Cull Tremayne 01:56, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
2. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 22:52, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
3. -- Darth Culator ^(Talk) 04:50, 25 April 2008 (UTC)
4. Thefourdotelipsis 00:06, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
5. Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:47, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
6. --Eyrezer 03:32, 27 April 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

1. From the Merciless Hammer of Toprawa:
   • Can we get something in the "Next" battle field above the infobox?
     • Sadly this battle isn't mentioned in the NEC, so it's hard to place. It should be either some battle from SotE or a battle on Iskalon. Either would be OR I'm guessing, so it might be better to just leave it blank. Cull Tremayne 02:09, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
       • That's fine.
   • Please reword to avoid ending both clauses with the same word: "Many of the Mandalorian slaves decided to join Shysa's strike force, bolstering their forces"
     • First "force" changed to "team". Hopefully that reads a little better.
       • Perfect.
   • Otherwise clean. Good job. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:24, 25 April 2008 (UTC)
     • Thanks for the review sir. Cull Tremayne 02:09, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
       • My pleasure. Glad to help. Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:47, 26 April 2008 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 12:37, 27 April 2008 (UTC)