Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Battle of Foerost (Great Sith War) (second nomination)

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Battle of Foerost (Great Sith War)

• Nominated by:—Tommy 9281 ^{(Mechno-chair)} 05:46, February 9, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: A current GA that I brought to 1,079 words, thanks to new information from the latest issue of KOTOR.

(5 Inqs/2 Users/7 Total)

Support

1. Good job as usual, Tommy. Gotta love KotOR.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 16:36, February 11, 2010 (UTC)
2. LtNOWIS 22:25, March 22, 2010 (UTC)
3. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 00:50, March 24, 2010 (UTC)
4. Well done. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(We seed the stars)} 01:09, March 24, 2010 (UTC)
5. CC7567 ^(talk) 22:42, March 30, 2010 (UTC)
6. — Fiolli ^{{Alpheridies University ComNet}} 15:39, April 1, 2010 (UTC)
7. Grunny (talk) 06:08, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Object

1. LtNOWIS
   • Just a few word choice issues.
   • For hundreds of years, the facility had churned out warships – "churned out" could probably be replaced by "produced" or something to be more encyclopedic.
     • Addressed.
   • The shipyards were quickly overrun, due largely to the savagery of the Mandalorians. – this seems to be in violation of NPOV
     • Try that.
   • The Krath forces then pulled out, abandoning the ravaged shipyards. – "ravaged" as well is a POV term.
     • Addressed.
   • Other than that, it looks good. -LtNOWIS 03:40, March 19, 2010 (UTC)
     • Thanks for the review, LtNOWIS. Please advise if anything further is required.—Tommy ⁹²⁸¹ 05:26, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 06:08, April 10, 2010 (UTC)