Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Battle of Deneba

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Battle of Deneba

(5 Inqs/3 Users/8 Total)

Support

1. Nominated. Greyman^(Talk) 04:16, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
2. Also nicely done. --Squishy Vic ^{(discussion) (contributions)} 00:34, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
3. Well done. Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:16, 26 March 2008 (UTC)
4. Addressed via IRC. Master Aban Fiolli ^{{Alpheridies University ComNet}} 00:49, 28 March 2008 (UTC)
5. How do I get suckered into reading these? Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 02:02, 29 March 2008 (UTC)
   • All I'm admitting to is the number "20" :P Greyman ^(Talk) 02:15, 29 March 2008 (UTC)
6. --Goodwood ^{(Alliance Intelligence)} 07:54, 29 March 2008 (UTC)
7. Cull Tremayne 21:53, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
8. -- Darth Culator ^(Talk) 18:37, 2 April 2008 (UTC)

Object

1. From the desk of Atarumaster88
   • Outcome: Decrease in Jedi morale??? That's sketchy at best, and certainly not something that should go in the infobox.
     • I beg to differ, especially since it's in the sources, but I've removed it for ya :) Greyman ^(Talk) 01:57, 29 March 2008 (UTC)
   • "The Dark Lords of the Sith audio drama brought the dramatic events of the Battle of Deneba, only previously experienced on comic pages, into a much more vivid light." That flowery and repetitive BTS sentence needs to be either cited as a direct quote, or removed. The idea of an audio drama being "much more vivid" is POV on the part of the writer.
     • Remoooooved. Greyman ^(Talk) 01:57, 29 March 2008 (UTC)
   • Your casualties field is incorrect; many more Jedi were lost, not just Jeth. The little symbol should not be on Arca Jeth either-it's redundant.
     • I added the part of the other Jedi—an oversight on my part. The symbol, however, is used to denote that Jeth was killed. Casualty doesn't necessarily mean "killed". Greyman ^(Talk) 01:57, 29 March 2008 (UTC)
   • Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustating day. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 01:46, 29 March 2008 (UTC)
2. File:JfleetDeneba.jpg is fairly artifacty. File:Swdl3.jpg is just not very well scanned. Both need to be redone. --Imperialles 12:51, 2 April 2008 (UTC)
   • I've re-scanned both, and preformed some cleanup on them. Hopefully they are better. Greyman ^(Talk) 19:07, 2 April 2008 (UTC)
     • File:JfleetDeneba.jpg seems very blurry. If you can get me a raw scan, I'll try and see if I can improve it somehow. --Imperialles 22:53, 2 April 2008 (UTC)

Comments

• Continuation of WP:TOTJ. Greyman^(Talk) 04:16, 24 March 2008 (UTC)