Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Attack on Korriban (third nomination)

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Attack on Korriban

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It is my recommendation to you not to reference books by page numbers. We don't have a specific policy on this yet, but not everyone in the world uses the same edition of the same book. Language and printing variations often create page-number differences, which makes this type of referencing potentially useless to certain readers. It's something we're likely to tackle in a future consensus discussion, so this will take you ahead of the curve. Just combine those encyclopedia references into a single ref. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:40, April 26, 2018 (UTC)
- Ameliorated.--Jace Onasi (talk) 09:14, May 6, 2018 (UTC)
Reference 5 reads, "Since the attack on Korriban occurs between the Invasion of Ziost, which takes place in 3637 BBY (see reference 1)..." But Ref 1 makes no mention of the Invasion of Ziost, so readers like myself who have no knowledge of this game or its events can't possibly expect to have any hope of understanding how the Invasion of Ziost's date corresponds to anything being explained in Ref 1. Please do a better job of explaining the invasion's date reference. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 16:39, May 7, 2018 (UTC)

Sorry for stretching it out into this many nominations, I'm just too busy most of the time with study to worry about my nominations.--Jace Onasi (talk) 07:36, April 10, 2018 (UTC)
I updated the reference 16 citation template. Do you think it is sufficient?--Jace Onasi (talk) 07:36, April 10, 2018 (UTC)
Here's a link to the previous nomination.--Jace Onasi (talk) 07:36, April 10, 2018 (UTC)