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4-A7 (Redux review)
- Redux comments: Reduxed per Meeting 138.
- Date added: June 7, 2022
(+4) (Inquisitorius votes only)
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OOM 224 (he/him) 21:26, 5 February 2023 (UTC)- JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 05:01, 13 March 2023 (UTC)
- —spookywillowwtalk 02:53, 9 April 2023 (UTC)
Supreme Emperor Holocomm 07:21, 11 April 2023 (UTC)
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OOM
I recommend enlarging the images.- Good? Editoronthewiki (talk) 16:35, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
"He then stood by Ventress when she spoke with Dooku via hologram and sent the recording,[4] which had also been edited by her and 4-A7[14] into a montage[7] that made it seem like Rotta was being abused,[14] to the count[3] and Ventress." — confused as to why the droid supposedly sent the recording to Ventress, whom he was standing beside? This also seems a bit redundant to the previous part that also talks about the footage; in fact, the article is indicating that there were two separate footages.OOM 224 22:42, 2 January 2023 (UTC)- Good? Fixed what appeared to be a typo, it was sent by Ventress, "and" was a mistake. Also, the bit about two footages is to discuss how its initially edited by 4-a7 in his head, then by him and ventress. should be more clear now Editoronthewiki (talk) 02:26, 8 January 2023 (UTC)
Oops, sorry for the delay! The images are better, aye, and that does make more sense, thanks. I further tweaked the line for clarity, but please check if the references still hold up :)OOM 224 (he/him) 21:40, 29 January 2023 (UTC)- Seems good! Editoronthewiki (talk) 16:16, 4 February 2023 (UTC)
Macaroni
Dooku bio gallery citation should mention which slide it's citing.- Fixed Editoronthewiki (talk) 22:29, 7 February 2023 (UTC)
Do we know who ordered this? "4-A7 had been ordered to gain the trust..." and "...was thus ordered to prepare an old..."- No we do not to both Editoronthewiki (talk) 04:05, 16 February 2023 (UTC)
Legacy has two consecutive sentences begin with "Nonetheless", so I'd suggest varying that.- Changed one to "despite that" Editoronthewiki (talk) 20:16, 11 February 2023 (UTC)
Why is dark italicized in "dark trailer"?- How its written on the blu ray Editoronthewiki (talk) 02:23, 15 February 2023 (UTC)
I would reword the bts so that it's clear he was created for the film but happened to appear in the trailer first. See Unidentified Mon Calamari (Mon Cala) as an example.- Thoughts? Editoronthewiki (talk) 04:21, 16 February 2023 (UTC)
Instead of having the long ref about release dates, you should just mention the film's full date in the prose, cite it, and then mention the release date of the novel and JN. (See WP:LG/IU#Publication dates)- Thoughts? Editoronthewiki (talk) 04:21, 16 February 2023 (UTC)
- Only the American release date needs to be mentioned. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:46, 3 March 2023 (UTC)
- Ah, because of that I can just cite to the trailer for release date. Removed foreign release date Editoronthewiki (talk) 23:18, 3 March 2023 (UTC)
- Only the American release date needs to be mentioned. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:46, 3 March 2023 (UTC)
- Thoughts? Editoronthewiki (talk) 04:21, 16 February 2023 (UTC)
Release date for Rising Malevolence, please, and it being a season one episode should be self-sourcing thanks to D+.- Done Editoronthewiki (talk) 04:21, 16 February 2023 (UTC)
Release year for Build R2 and HC, please.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:02, 6 February 2023 (UTC)- Added Editoronthewiki (talk) 04:21, 16 February 2023 (UTC)