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Lalaren bloom
- Requested By: —spookywillowwtalk
- Date Requested: 18:40, 20 February 2024 (UTC)
- Date Archived: 00:53, 16 April 2024 (UTC)
Object
- Bin cleaning: update tagged for month.—spookywillowwtalk 18:40, 20 February 2024 (UTC)
- Addressed Panther436 (talk) 04:20, 13 April 2024 (UTC)
- I personally think it relevant to note Hap was on Tenoo for the YJA bit. It would somewhat imply that its available on the planet, and though I'd agree we can't say so outright, its also worth adding since it probably was in his kitchen then (to make the stew).—spookywillowwtalk 22:51, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
- Episode makes it very clear that most of the ingredients were specially delivered from off-world and it doesn't actually say or show that he has the lalaren blooms (he just reads off the recipe) so I did something a little different. Hope that's alright. Panther436 (talk) 23:47, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
- I do still disagree mostly; for food, we would traditionally document every place that the food could 'found', even if transported and not growing/originated there. That also applies for food that's traveled places, so long as it was available on the world at one point. In this case, it wouldn't be in the infobox or anything because it is vague, but the episode is also decently clear that Hap has all the ingredients for the stew and intends to make it in the immediate future, which means it should also be clear that he's intending to make the stew [on Tenoo].—spookywillowwtalk 23:53, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
- So is what I did not enough though? I thought it was pretty clear without making assumptions. Also by the way, Hap is surprised by seeing lalaren blooms on the list (so didn't plan for it) and does not end up making the stew. Panther436 (talk) 00:10, 16 April 2024 (UTC)
- Ideally it would follow the standard "While on the planet Tenoo in 232 BBY, the Latero chef Hap planned to make his friend…"—spookywillowwtalk 00:14, 16 April 2024 (UTC)
- Done Panther436 (talk) 00:36, 16 April 2024 (UTC)
- Ideally it would follow the standard "While on the planet Tenoo in 232 BBY, the Latero chef Hap planned to make his friend…"—spookywillowwtalk 00:14, 16 April 2024 (UTC)
- So is what I did not enough though? I thought it was pretty clear without making assumptions. Also by the way, Hap is surprised by seeing lalaren blooms on the list (so didn't plan for it) and does not end up making the stew. Panther436 (talk) 00:10, 16 April 2024 (UTC)
- I do still disagree mostly; for food, we would traditionally document every place that the food could 'found', even if transported and not growing/originated there. That also applies for food that's traveled places, so long as it was available on the world at one point. In this case, it wouldn't be in the infobox or anything because it is vague, but the episode is also decently clear that Hap has all the ingredients for the stew and intends to make it in the immediate future, which means it should also be clear that he's intending to make the stew [on Tenoo].—spookywillowwtalk 23:53, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
- Episode makes it very clear that most of the ingredients were specially delivered from off-world and it doesn't actually say or show that he has the lalaren blooms (he just reads off the recipe) so I did something a little different. Hope that's alright. Panther436 (talk) 23:47, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
- Somewhat same logic for adding Geeli's species.—spookywillowwtalk 22:52, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
- Added Panther436 (talk) 23:47, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
- I personally think it relevant to note Hap was on Tenoo for the YJA bit. It would somewhat imply that its available on the planet, and though I'd agree we can't say so outright, its also worth adding since it probably was in his kitchen then (to make the stew).—spookywillowwtalk 22:51, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
- Addressed Panther436 (talk) 04:20, 13 April 2024 (UTC)
Comments
- Marked for probation at 1 month unaddressed.—spookywillowwtalk 00:04, 20 March 2024 (UTC)
Vote to retain Comprehensive status
—spookywillowwtalk 00:40, 16 April 2024 (UTC)- Lewisr (talk) 00:42, 16 April 2024 (UTC)
- Panther436 (talk) 00:50, 16 April 2024 (UTC)