Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article reviews/Gusha

Requested By: — spookywilloww talk
Date Requested: 03:12, 15 April 2023 (UTC)
Date Archived: 00:27, 7 June 2023 (UTC)

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Gusha

~~Comic's intro page dates the events to 'approximately 137 years after Yavin', the firm "in 137 ABY" needs to be sourced.~~
- Added, although trying to find out if the interior of the trade paper back explicitly dates it to 137 ABY. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:51, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
~~Tatooine needs context as a planet.~~
- Checked it can be ref'd to the comic and added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:51, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
"She told Gusha to keep the change to "buy the missus a little something" before she took her prey elsewhere."—this can be reworded in a less objectifying, while still remaining reflective of the events.
- Did you have a specific alternative wording in mind? I think it's worth retaining the implication that Gusha potentially has a wife, but not sure of the best way to do that while removing any objectification. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:51, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
  - Hadn't realized it was a direct quote until checking today. I concur with that assessment though, and since it's the character themselves being slightly ick and it is properly marked in ", should be fine.—spookywilloww^talk 20:35, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
~~Document missing equipment.~~—spookywilloww^talk 03:12, 15 April 2023 (UTC)
- Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:51, 6 June 2023 (UTC)

Sent to probation at 1 month unaddressed.—spookywilloww^talk 01:33, 15 May 2023 (UTC)