Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article reviews/Charal's armor

Requested By: — spookywilloww talk
Date Requested: 23:45, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
Date Archived: 01:54, 30 October 2024 (UTC)

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Charal's armor

This edit bumped this over wordcount earlier this month. Some of it is sourced; some isn't. What can/should be salvaged should be looked into and then the wordcount should be looked at to see if this needs to go up the chain.—spookywilloww^talk 23:45, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
As I mentioned on discord a bit ago, I think the page should be rewrote a little to more indicate the page is for Charal's armor and less about a set of Nightsister armor Lewisr (talk) 00:13, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
- All done, sorry for the wait. AmazinglyCool (talk) 12:09, 29 October 2024 (UTC)

As I've stated on the wiki Discord, the "Dathomir Field Guide" that the article cites is a work of fanon, and the information added from SWG is unrelated to the subject of this article. As such, the edit should be reverted and the article will remain under the word count. If I had to guess, I would suspect that the person who made this edit understood that the subject of this article was for any and all types of armor that the Nightsisters wear, and not a specific type of armor worn by Charal. AmazinglyCool (talk) 19:46, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
- Perhaps a better title for this article would be "Charal's armor"? AmazinglyCool (talk) 19:47, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
  - Agreed with this, it'd be a bit more concise.—spookywilloww^talk 05:24, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed. Lewisr (talk) 01:23, 29 October 2024 (UTC)