Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Zoochberry Surprise

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Contents

  • 1 Zoochberry Surprise
    • 1.1 (2 ECs/4 Users/6 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Fred strikes back
        • 1.1.2.2 OOM
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Zoochberry Surprise

  • Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 17:35, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(2 ECs/4 Users/6 Total)

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Support

  1. I've been looking forward to this nom! Om nom nom... Immi Thrax (talk) 09:08, 8 April 2021 (UTC)
  2. ECvote MasterFredCommerce Guild(talk) 03:52, 9 April 2021 (UTC)
  3. VergenceScatter (talk) 07:17, 9 April 2021 (UTC)
  4. ECvote OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 15:19, 9 April 2021 (UTC)
  5. <-Omicron(Leave a message at the BEEP!) 16:57, 12 April 2021 (UTC)
  6. AmazinglyCool (talk) 17:01, 12 April 2021 (UTC)

Object

Fred strikes back
  • "...sweet, juicy, and burstin' with so much flavor..." needs to be mentioned in the prose and explained as Tuggs' opinion. It also doesn't really belong in the infobox, though the three layers and berries on top do. MasterFredCommerce Guild(talk) 03:31, 9 April 2021 (UTC)
    • Done—would you like me to mention the colors in the infobox? Thanks for the review! JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 03:45, 9 April 2021 (UTC)
      • Nah, this is fine. MasterFredCommerce Guild(talk) 03:52, 9 April 2021 (UTC)
OOM
  • The article says the dessert was topped with a berry, which contradicts the infobox description and image. OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 11:37, 9 April 2021 (UTC)
    • Changed to say multiple. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 15:16, 9 April 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 17:42, 12 April 2021 (UTC)