Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Z23-Y75

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Z23-Y75

• Nominated by: Commander Code-8 ^{G'day, mate} 22:12, April 3, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: In memory of LucasArts :(

(4 ECs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Stake black ^msg 18:32, April 4, 2013 (UTC)
2. Good-bye, LucasArts. :( Now, come on, Obsidian. Pick up the slack.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 18:41, April 4, 2013 (UTC)
3. RIP. :( 501st dogma^(talk) 21:51, April 5, 2013 (UTC)
4. I was looking forward to 1313...--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 22:13, April 6, 2013 (UTC)
5. Still waiting on Battlefront 3 :P Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:46, April 9, 2013 (UTC)
6. Winterz (talk) 22:41, April 14, 2013 (UTC)

Object

1. The last sentence of the BtS is a little weird. I'm not sure what you meant. Stake black ^msg 02:23, April 4, 2013 (UTC)
   • I've re-written the sentence, that help? Commander Code-8 ^{G'day, mate} 08:01, April 4, 2013 (UTC)
2. "... to serve in the droid army of the galactic corporation; the Trade Federation." You're not using the semicolon right here. You probably want a colon instead, as the semicolon necessitates a sentence that is connected to the sentence before the semicolon. 501st dogma^(talk) 21:18, April 4, 2013 (UTC)
   • Done. Commander Code-8 ^{G'day, mate} 01:24, April 5, 2013 (UTC)

1. Winterz
   • Considering the large explanation, you should probably ref the Bts ;) Winterz (talk) 15:30, April 7, 2013 (UTC)
     • Done. Commander Code-8 ^{G'day, mate} 22:16, April 7, 2013 (UTC)

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