Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Yrica Quell's girlfriend

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Yrica Quell's girlfriend

• Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 13:17, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Nette
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:PRIDE and WP:NOVELS

(3 ECs/3 Users/6 Total)

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Support

1. Make sure you're ok with this very minor copy edit.LucaRoR ^(Talk) 18:01, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
2. Looks good to me. -- YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 18:21, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
3. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 04:00, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
4. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 01:25, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
5. Liverpool92 03:00, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
6. OOM 224 17:55, 7 September 2021 (UTC)

Object

Luca

• I think we avoid using the word "this" in IU articles.
• Maybe specifying that Yrica Quell was female earlier could help.
• Since they had a relationship before she left the Galactic Empire, wouldn't it be better to provide a different context for Yrica Quell in the first line?
• Since Alphabet Squadron isn't a conjectural name, I think you should write it down in full.
• A paragraph break before "While Quell reviewed the records […]"? LucaRoR ^(Talk) 14:09, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
  • All sorted. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 17:15, 31 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Yakov

• I think I would change the last three words of “Freed replied claiming there was not enough evidence to say for sure that Nette was the first girlfriend” as “Quell's first girlfriend”. — YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 14:15, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Changed. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 17:15, 31 August 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 17:55, 7 September 2021 (UTC)