Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Yrica Quell's boyfriend

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Yrica Quell's boyfriend

• Nominated by: YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 21:12, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Immi Thrax told me this article is under the scope of WP:PRIDE 🏳️‍🌈❤️ And it’s Bi visibility day and Yrica had at least one male and at least one female partner :)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:PRIDE and WP:NOVELS

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Support

1. Dentface (talk) 15:11, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
2. Immi Thrax (talk) 04:00, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
3. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 18:40, 2 October 2021 (UTC)
4. OOM 224 16:52, 6 October 2021 (UTC)
5. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 17:08, 6 October 2021 (UTC)

Object

Luca

• The article is almost an exact copy of this. Changing the wording a bit would be nice. : ) LucaRoR ^(Talk) 21:32, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Better now, or do you prefer more differences? — YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 06:20, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Much better! LucaRoR ^(Talk) 07:26, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
• Is there no quote? I'm thinking about the one in which Yrica Quell tells to the droid that she is willing to discuss her first boyfriend. Not owning the book, however, I'm not sure. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 07:26, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Not really. She tells the IT-0 droid she'll talk about "anything you like," and then thinks about her parents, her first girlfriend and her last boyfriend. No verbal quote, though. -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 22:23, 1 October 2021 (UTC)

Immi Thrax, called out

Obligatory review ;)

• The first sentence and the second sentence have ideas that belong together to explain what makes him the "last" boyfriend (the last before her defection, the last relative to the particular conversation, rather than the definitely last ever boyfriend). I'd like to see either the word "last" not used in the first, or bring those ideas together, please. Immi Thrax (talk) 09:32, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
  • How now? — YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 21:00, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Brown cow? I mean, good! Immi Thrax (talk) 02:59, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
• Might want to clarify that Quell told the droid she was willing/claimed to be willing to discuss anything... (that wasn't actually true) Immi Thrax (talk) 02:59, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Good catch! Addressed — YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 03:17, 26 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 17:08, 6 October 2021 (UTC)