- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.
Wookiee dual missile turret
- Nominated by: Manoof (talk) 01:10, January 15, 2015 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: WP:VG, 1st weapon I've nom'd
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Exiled Jedi
- In the BTS, could you describe how the weapon was named in each of the sources?
- "Each tube contained a powerful missile that could pierce the hull of a starship, though they had a slow rate of fire." the start of the sentence and the infobox make it sound like the turret only had two missiles, while the end of the sentence makes it sound like it had more than two. Could you make this clearer?
- "who would defend their position from aerial assault from either Trandoshan or CIS forces" I would mention this part separately from the description as they are not really logically connected.
- After these additions, I would recommend sectioning the article, writing an introduction, and seeing if the article is long enough to go to the GAN page.--Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 21:21, January 20, 2015 (UTC)
- Rewrote the body and intro, pretty sure all issues fixed. Definitely long enough for GA, but I currently have the maximum four nominations there, so not sure how that works... Manoof (talk) 05:55, January 21, 2015 (UTC)
- Since it is way over the CAN word limit, I'll go ahead and archive it shortly. You can nominate it for a GAN when you have fewer active nominations there.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 06:31, January 21, 2015 (UTC)
- Since it is way over the CAN word limit, I'll go ahead and archive it shortly. You can nominate it for a GAN when you have fewer active nominations there.--Exiled Jedi
- Rewrote the body and intro, pretty sure all issues fixed. Definitely long enough for GA, but I currently have the maximum four nominations there, so not sure how that works... Manoof (talk) 05:55, January 21, 2015 (UTC)
