Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Warda Gojun

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Warda Gojun

  • Nominated by: TK-462 (talk) 22:32, June 14, 2020 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(0 ECs/0 Users/0 Total)

(Votes required: 2 EC vote(s) required to reach minimum. Additional 3 user or 1 EC vote required to pass.)

Support

Object

Lewisr
  • Infobox exclusive information
  • The Rogue One visual guide doesn't use BBY, so you'll need to write a ref note for his birth date, and the fact Rogue One took place in 0 BBY --Lewisr (talk) 22:38, June 14, 2020 (UTC)
    • Fixed both errors. TK-462 (talk) 23:01, June 14, 2020 (UTC)
  • You could probably add an equipment section, given he's wearing some kind of armor and what the guide points out on his page.
  • Also the guide uses foot and inches which should be added, see 4D6-J-A7 for example.
  • I believe there are a few missing links that can be added, both in the intro and biography.
Zed
  • The body is less words than is allowed for sectioning, but the events of the film could definitely be given further detail. Zed42 (talk) 22:51, June 14, 2020 (UTC)
  • BTS needs references. Zed42 (talk) 22:52, June 14, 2020 (UTC)
    • Fixed. TK-462 (talk) 23:57, June 14, 2020 (UTC)
      • The body could also be expanded with a Personality and traits section to list his physical features, as well as an Equipment section for his armor and equipment. Zed42 (talk) 00:08, June 15, 2020 (UTC)
  • His designation is intro-exclusive.
  • The 22 BBY date in the intro needs to use the date note, and the 0 BBY date should also be attached to the Rogue One events to date those. Zed42 (talk) 00:16, June 15, 2020 (UTC)
    • I believed this is fixed, but I'm a bit unclear as to what you meant so correct me if I'm wrong. That said, this article has obviously exceeded the word limit, so it's not a big deal at this point. TK-462 (talk) 00:58, June 15, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

TK
  • Clearly this article has exceeded the word limit for CANs, and I admit my defeat. Still, this does have the distinction of being my fastest-failing article, so I guess that's an achievement. Thank you to Lewisr and Zed for your imput, and I apologize for wasting EduCorps time. TK-462 (talk) 01:01, June 15, 2020 (UTC)