Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Vossk

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Vossk

  • Nominated by: Tm T 19:59, June 5, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Not much of my contribution but had this in mind already...

(1 GCs/5 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 16:51, June 10, 2010 (UTC)
  2. —Master Jonathan New Jedi Order (Jedi Council Chambers) 18:44, June 10, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Imperialles 16:52, June 19, 2010 (UTC)
  4. ECvote --Eyrezer 12:17, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
  5. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 08:38, June 30, 2010 (UTC)
  6. Jinzler 09:17, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Object

  1. It needs to be sourced, and if there's any info from Insider that needs to be added too. I'd say it could expanded a little bit overall too, in terms of context at least. And the BtS needs improvement. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 20:08, June 5, 2010 (UTC)
    • Better now? --Tm T 14:16, June 10, 2010 (UTC)
      • I've stricken but I still think this could be expanded a fair bit and easily reach 250 words. Everything seems a bit cursory, and the Jedi Exile needs context. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 13:53, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Can you really source the BtS? If not, then it must go. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 20:26, June 5, 2010 (UTC)
    • Totally rewritten --Tm T 14:16, June 10, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Could you add some quotes to the article? --Jinzler 14:01, June 6, 2010 (UTC)
    • Will try obtain something useful, but cannot promise. --Tm T 17:45, June 10, 2010 (UTC)
  4. Currently you have the entire first sentence sourced to the Insider article, but that article contains only the fact that he was a Guild leader and nothing else. Please correct this so that the first part of the sentence is properly sourced. —Master Jonathan New Jedi Order (Jedi Council Chambers) 16:58, June 10, 2010 (UTC)
    • Tried to fix that first sentence, also I'm now unsure if that source identifies him as trandoshan, should that be fixed aswell? --Tm T 17:45, June 10, 2010 (UTC)
  5. The Insider article does not identify his species, so please remove that ref. Additionally, you only need one ref on each line in the infobox anyway, even if multiple sources give the information, so pick one ref on each of the bottom two lines and kill the other one. —Master Jonathan New Jedi Order (Jedi Council Chambers) 17:52, June 10, 2010 (UTC)
  6. I think the term Smuggler's Moon needs to be linked more clearly to Nar Shaddaa. Less Star Wars savvy readers may not immediately connect the two together, and it could cause confusion. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 04:06, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
    • Tied in, thanks --Tm T 12:21, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
  7. Eyrezer: Becauase the article has an intro and a Biography section, you need to write the article accordingly. That measn there should be no uniqiue information in the intro that is not in the body - here, that Vossk is a Trandoshan etc. Secondly, the info should probably include the fact he is a bounty hunter. --Eyrezer 02:29, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

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