Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Vicon

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Vicon

  • Nominated by: Eyrezer 08:33, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Almost at the end of the Alphabet!

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 06:20, July 31, 2010 (UTC)
  2. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 01:41, August 10, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Menkooroo 06:36, August 13, 2010 (UTC)
  4. ~ SavageBob 22:51, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Comments

  1. "They had long noses which they twitched" does not sound very wiki-like. Though it would still be fine without any changes, I believe it would benefit from a change of wording in that sentence (though I could be wrong).--Bonslywizard (I am the senate!)Trade Federation 02:42, August 1, 2010 (UTC)
    • I added a comma before the "which", but I am not sure otherwise what is wrong with the sentence. I'm open to suggestions for rewording though. --Eyrezer 23:32, August 9, 2010 (UTC)