Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Vevut Squad

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Vevut Squad

• Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:55, April 4, 2014 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Last CAN on the Republic/Imperial commando series

(4 ECs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 10:34, April 13, 2014 (UTC)
2. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:37, April 13, 2014 (UTC)
3. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 20:32, April 14, 2014 (UTC)
4. 501st dogma^(talk) 00:38, April 15, 2014 (UTC)
5. Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:55, April 18, 2014 (UTC)

Object

SE

• Can you reword the beginning of the second sentence? Saying born and created seems a bit redundant to me.
  • Done. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:15, April 9, 2014 (UTC)
    • Would you mind using the word created instead? Imo, they weren't really "born" persay. Supreme Emperor (talk) 06:22, April 15, 2014 (UTC)
      • Done. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:20, April 15, 2014 (UTC)
• You could probably link to some of the other commando units Jusik was in command of as well. Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:29, April 9, 2014 (UTC)
  • Pipelinked. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:15, April 9, 2014 (UTC)

501st

• "Born on the planet Kamino, Vevut Squad was trained by..." I don't think you can say the squad was born on Kamino.... 501st dogma^(talk) 20:55, April 11, 2014 (UTC)
  • Changed to "created". Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 20:57, April 11, 2014 (UTC)
    • I would change it to: "With all of its members born on Kaminio, Vevut Squad was...." 501st dogma^(talk) 14:12, April 13, 2014 (UTC)
      • Changed per your suggestion. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 14:16, April 13, 2014 (UTC)

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