Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Vernestra Rwoh's family group

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Vernestra Rwoh's family group

  • Nominated by: Lewisr (talk) 04:10, 28 September 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 04:14, 30 September 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 203 words (0 introduction, 165 body, 38 behind the scenes)
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Support

  1. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:25, 28 September 2023 (UTC)
  2. ECvote NBDani TeamFireballLogo-Collider(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 23:28, 28 September 2023 (UTC)
  3. ECvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 23:47, 28 September 2023 (UTC)

Object

Dani
  • The next paragraph's "That year" feels like it's building off the year she was taken to be a Jedi. I think re-establishing 232 BBY would be beneficial. NBDani TeamFireballLogo-Collider(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 19:22, 28 September 2023 (UTC)
    • Changed...eventually:P Lewisr (talk) 20:00, 28 September 2023 (UTC)
  • Could you change "the Mirialan's force-sensitivity" to the child or another identifier? Though it'd be assumptious, I feel readers will assume the family group to be Mirialian. NBDani TeamFireballLogo-Collider(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 19:22, 28 September 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 04:12, 30 September 2023 (UTC)