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Ven (clone trooper)
- Nominated by:DarthRageLeave a message after the beep
- Nomination comments:My first nomination
(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
- I cleaned up my only objection, which was some clunky wording. Trak Nar Ramble on 21:08, August 13, 2010 (UTC)
—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 23:04, August 13, 2010 (UTC)- -- 1358 (Talk) 13:25, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
- Discussed with DarthRage via IRC. —Xwing328(Talk) 23:16, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
Object
The quote: The "unidentified clone trooper" is OOU. Use "A clone trooper" instead.- Done DarthRageLeave a message after the beep 16:55, August 8, 2010 (UTC)
Link for the battle on Qiilura?- Not a named battle, cannot find article. DarthRageLeave a message after the beep
- Create an article, then link it.
- Created article and linked it. DarthRageLeave a message after the beep
- Create an article, then link it.
- Not a named battle, cannot find article. DarthRageLeave a message after the beep
Context on the colonists.- Could you elaborate? DarthRageLeave a message after the beep 16:55, August 8, 2010 (UTC
- If you have 'the', you need context. If it is not known what colonists they were, please remove 'the'.
- Removed. DarthRageLeave a message after the beep 20:26, August 11, 2010 (UTC)
- If you have 'the', you need context. If it is not known what colonists they were, please remove 'the'.
- Could you elaborate? DarthRageLeave a message after the beep 16:55, August 8, 2010 (UTC
Underlinking (Jedi General, artillery for example).Levet is a link to a redirect.- FixedDarthRageLeave a message after the beep
- AT-TE and LAAT/i are also.
- Fixed all three. DarthRageLeave a message after the beep
- AT-TE and LAAT/i are also.
- FixedDarthRageLeave a message after the beep
"His brothers gave..." Brothers? "His fellow clones troopers.." would be better.- Fixed DarthRageLeave a message after the beep 16:55, August 8, 2010 (UTC)
Could you link to the specific gunship?- Fixed. Per IRC DarthRageLeave a message after the beep 16:55, August 8, 2010 (UTC
The Bts needs to be rewritten. It should contain from where the info comes (for example "Ven was a character introduced in RC:TC, which was released on <year>.").- Done DarthRageLeave a message after the beep 16:55, August 8, 2010 (UTC)
- Possibly more to come. -- 1358 (Talk) 07:11, August 8, 2010 (UTC)
One more thing: Use {{Ref|reference goes here}} in the infobox. See other GAs/FAs for examples.-- 1358 (Talk) 05:19, August 14, 2010 (UTC)- Fixed, with your help. DarthRageLeave a message after the beep 13:18, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
Comments
- This article is being discussed on the IRC. So corrections are being made.
- No objections, but keep in mind that context in important. Also, there is no need to put the whole source for every ref. You're doing "<ref name="EX">''[[Example]]''</ref> every time. It's much easier if you do <ref name="EX" />, after you put the first reference for a particular source. This is a suggestion, though, but, like I said, it's much easier.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 23:02, August 13, 2010 (UTC)