Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Vella

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Vella

• Nominated by: BloodOfIrizi (talk) 17:20, 7 August 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: first comic nom wooo
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:COMICS

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Support

1. Fan26 (Talk) 16:59, 9 August 2022 (UTC)
2. OOM 224 18:53, 10 August 2022 (UTC)
3. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 08:51, 13 August 2022 (UTC)
4. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 21:19, 19 August 2022 (UTC)
5. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:39, 20 August 2022 (UTC)

Object

Fan

• Flagship ought t' be linked
  • done
• The context on what the path engine can do doesnt seme relevant specifically to Vella.Fan26 (Talk) 20:19, 7 August 2022 (UTC)
  • done BloodOfIrizi (talk) 21:30, 7 August 2022 (UTC)
• Domina's only tangentially relevant to Vella, so I'd say remove the mention of her as leading the Tagge Corporation (since the House takes precedence over it IU the House should stay) to cut down on the context for her. Fan26 (Talk) 16:37, 8 August 2022 (UTC)
  • removed BloodOfIrizi (talk) 19:29, 8 August 2022 (UTC)

OOM

• It's best to mention an astronomical objection whenever a location is discussed, so the world on which De'Rruyet Center existed should be specified.
  • done
• Per Wookieepedia:Layout_Guide#Table_of_contents, the table of contents on this article should be removed using the {{Top}} template. OOM 224 10:23, 10 August 2022 (UTC)
  • done BloodOfIrizi (talk) 18:35, 10 August 2022 (UTC)

Braha

• Midarr's locational affiliation with the centre cannot be sourced with Aphra 6, that info is first established in Aphra 9, while Aphra 8 is what establishes it as a planet. Please reference accordingly. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 20:28, 10 August 2022 (UTC)
  • done BloodOfIrizi (talk) 22:59, 12 August 2022 (UTC)

Macaroni

• Please source the bts. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 21:17, 10 August 2022 (UTC)
  • done BloodOfIrizi (talk) 22:59, 12 August 2022 (UTC)
    • The full release date needs a separate source. And check your bts italics. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 04:41, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
      • got em BloodOfIrizi (talk) 23:40, 14 August 2022 (UTC)

Manoof

• There's precedent for first mentions in previews of a product to be noted in the BTS as well as the product itself eg Venator II-class Star Destroyer. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:01, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
  • done BloodOfIrizi (talk) 18:36, 15 August 2022 (UTC)
    • Oop, can you mention the date of the preview as well, sorry should've mentioned it! Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:38, 16 August 2022 (UTC)
      • got it BloodOfIrizi (talk) 16:55, 16 August 2022 (UTC)
        • Sorry this took longer than expected, life has been hectic lol Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:39, 20 August 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 10:39, 20 August 2022 (UTC)